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exactly

Thanks for the chapter, one thing that was uncomfortable to read and didn't add up was when he asked for the water and told her why he was asking for the water.

regulation I hope that PJ learns to fight, first the friend and now the new boy at any moment receives a beating, he seemed like a very good person and quite naive until now. The rest is pretty good, the fanfic is solid.

Thanks for the chapter, I'm watching this after letting the chapters accumulate, so I don't remember the personality of the protagonist, but I felt it was silly.

Emma x Bas, no felton

In the comments of the chapters where it is mentioned that she is pretty, you can find the image.

Another chapter that I don't like, I feel like lately they're screwing with the MC like it's nothing and he can't/do anything in response, example: when they injected him to put him to sleep and right now in the interview, the interviewer forced him to speak in Spanish (bothering him ) and he still took a photo with her at the end, I feel like he's being too passive.

Ugh, I don't like being given orders like that or being drugged and I don't do anything, but at the same time I want him to continue acting in movies, dramas, etc. ( Traductor)

Ugh, well I got to chapter 25, between the fact that Grayfia is not in the harem and that you unnecessarily change the gender of the characters, since there are so many female characters, I didn't like it, good luck in the fanfic too. .

grayfia please to the harem

Grayfia has to be added to the harem, it's by law😆

Ugh, I'm curious why they did that to him now.

I feel like the characters lack personality, they feel empty. I recommend a novel of the same type so that you can improve and understand more, it is Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood. I hope you don't take the criticism the wrong way, I'm telling you all this as a reader and because I feel it has a lot of potential.