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Tl;dr : overall i like it. The beginning is good but too long. Some part in the middle are not well done and boring but other part are near perfect. The universe is well built but some part are inconsistant or missing imo (partly for futur project ?), the end is completly rushed. The author is really good for writing some "sad part" of his story but more "epic situation" are needed. Teasing for futur event is too much (like "this decision may change the rest of all living being") and i think the author forgot some. Author need to better think on the balance of the story, and write the storyboard at the beginning. (Spoiler : "adopted baby", Ark with the monarch "ok good luck, we leave, bb", the end complelty rushed. You can't do that man) BUT for a first novel it's a really good start with lot of thing to improve.

My rating is not my real feeling but i'm not here for unmotiving the author. I was in search for good VRMMORPG novel. I find 2 promising but not many chapter so i came here. General point of view review : - I think Writing is average at best for English people, it's okay for me because it's not my language but too many careless mistake (missing letters, inversed letters etc.). The updating frequency and stability seems good. Some good moment. Personnal point of view : I like pve oriented novel, it's more pvp (but more mixed than other well know of this type) I don't like WTF real world background : it's a level higher than "thief who..." The Character design and world background is good for the ingame part but must be better if less rushed. All this is not enough for me to drop it but... 1/ Story development is too fast, really really too fast. 2/ Author listens too much to comments No, you can't let decide the comments which spell the MC must take in the next chapter. No, you can't name an Emperor "Cervantez91" for a gift. No, you can't say "let the plot develop, i'm an author i have plan" and the next chapter you "drop" (author word) a fan service explication chapter because comments are burning... Stop thanking people or complain (for an objectif lose) or giving ultimatum (for a bonus) at each chapter. We may think you do that for the minimum number of character....... Yes, my review is a bit rough but remember my first sentence. I think the author can do better (some idea are really good/original, just need a (better) story development plan), an editor ( check the easy mistake at minimum) and we can see that the motivation is here just need a more professionnal approach. I drop for that, sorry.

I share the same opinion for many novel. "Oh a reincarnated MC 10 years before", "Oh a useless boy who is doted with a system" "Oh a MC with the poorest talent going to live a life of trash, Oh wait, this is not the poorest talent but the more powerfull one" etc. but i like some of these story because the writing is good (not poor, not too much for exceed the light novel range) or/and the storyline is good or/and the author work on the psychos of the differents characters or/and the world background is good or/and the joke are good. etc. But i'm able to differentiate thing. I can drop some novel know are "one of the best" for many people, i know they are really good but not to my taste. There is no need to take out the sign "i'm not a pro reviewer" and the other sign "subjectivity". Don't post a critic or just give à 4.5 and explain it's not to your taste. You can find many worst novel here if you just want to trashtalk.

I was wondering why there is no more good VRMMORPG Novel ongoing. Moonlight sculptor is finish, waiting for a trad for taming master, so Overgeard is the only and real good one ongoing... I just find 2 new VRMMORPG with a good potential, and this one is in this two. I'm sure the author know the 3 novels above and i hope he can find an interessting original story. For the moment we can say "it's really good but a little "déjà vu"" but it It's just the beginning and it's better than most of the others VRMMORPG ongoing so give it a try and thank to the author for his work. PS : The only bad thing is the number of chapter release each week, drop the other novel ! [img=update]

My first reading on "cultivation type LN/Dongua". The best in cultivation drawn version (cause most of the others are shit). A good one for novice who want to try this type.