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All hail Britannia!!

I was surprised when I saw this novel, it is very well written, and you can see the effort the author is putting to make it well done. Don't expect anything too complex from this novel, it is simple and straightforward, the plot is well established and the characters are very good, (Kaguya is my favorite cough) Writing 5 stars. World was not developed enough for me to speak. Characters definitely 5 stars. updates? It's very good, the author updates every day with more than 2k words, as a reader I wanted more... but I know how difficult it is to do a good job like this without losing quality. Editor. this guy is very good, he is helping the author a lot. IsUnavailable, he's a good editor, the author sure found a gem. Overall, it's a good novel for you to read with a smile on your face all the time, Violet the wife who's been introduced so far is very cute, and everyone who likes Yandere can like her too. (Isn't she psycho like Yuno, is she more like Albedo than overlord?) This is a good novel that I will definitely follow, the author is also one of my favorites, I have always followed his work, and he is a good person. I think that's it for now, Seeya.

Okay, the author deleted my review, I understand that I exaggerated but here is another one. Do not read this novel if you do not like themes like groups, ganband, or dark stories like that. The author managed to break the image that I had of Nacisa, if you are curious about what I am talking about, just read chapter 26.

This will not happen, the author said that she would have a second MC ..

1523/5000 If you were to do something like this, you shouldn't have changed anything. Just let her be the arrogant noble that we all know from books. I understand that you wanted to change something, after all, it is a Fanfic, but that is just disgusting, if it were just her husband it would be acceptable, and we would have a reason to hate Malfoy's father. But being raped by half the wizarding world? ... That's just disgusting ... I know she wasn’t raped by half the wizarding world, I just put it like that so I don’t list everything you’ve put as her background story. Another thing that was disgusting, is that she served Voldemort with her broken Sister. She was clearly raped along with her sister by Voldemort .... and she said it was amazing ... This is disgusting friend ... I don't know how you can write this and continue, I know you wanted to give Nacisa a tragic past, but this is just forcing the plot. I know you wanted to change, I know this is a fanfic, but .... Sigh. I don't know, just do what you want, I give up. This fanfic was incredible until this chapter, I honestly missed the hype of reading your fanfic. It was like I expected a very tasty pizza, but someone had thrown shit on it, that's just disappointing. Probably, you will lose many readers because of this, after all, there are few people who like this type of story, but probably, you don't mind, right? ......... You managed to destroy the image of Nacisa that I had from the books of J.K. Rollings

I agree.

The MC has personality disorder ... At first, I thought he was going to be the MC who cares about the family, after all, he made a wish about it, right? But in some chapters there is almost no interaction with the family, they are just backgrounds for a rich family that is not even that powerful. Does Flash threaten the MC even though he knows about his family? It doesn't make sense, he may be an idiot, but he is not stupid. Another thing that annoys me is Felicia being made like a seductive bitch. She is not like that, he is just like that with people close to him, or when she is Black Cat. Seeing the MC being Peter's beta is another irritating thing too. One thing I notice, is that the Author takes an element of the story and does not build it, he just adds it. Example: Why did you add the family if you don't build the MC's relationship with them? For anyone reading this, just turn off the brain and read through the Hobby.