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I always imagine how whipped the ones calling no harem must be that they cannot even have a harem in their fantasies.

Is every review here a spam or fake? Not a single real review. Any author that uses Edith OC is not an author. This is just lazy. Could have made the story without that OC and it would have been fine.

Story might be fine if you can read it with horrible grammer and the Chinese name. It breaks the flow every time I try to read it. Even if the original has a Chinese name, you could change it to something readable.

Too many crossovers. The author does not know how to write well. There is cultivation in here. So beware. Then for some reason, One Piece as well. It makes no sense. It started off well, but it seems like the author got bored and started adding whatever comes to mind regardless of the story. Disappointing!!!

Good so far. But if you nerf him, that's goodbye. Nerf sucks . No need for it. His attitude could be worked on, but no nerf. MAKE IT WORK. You seem to be a good enough author.

Multiple MCs that switch between POV. After it happened the first two times, I stopped reading so I don't know if it stopped. But you should skip this fic if multiple MCs is irritating, annoying and straight up feel unnecessary. It could have been the same MC in all the worlds and it would not have made a difference.

Not as innovative as author wants it be. I might be biased because I have read better stories about shield power used rather innovatively. The MC is also not as engaging. A bit more time spent on unimportant things than should beq in a fanfic.

Have you even read the canon? If that is really your version of Luna, you need to get your imagination checked.

Seriously! The character descriptions are eating away my patience. Otherwise decent. We know what they look like, stop describing them. It is very annoying.

I like the story but I had a few problems with this. The cultivation aside, the fruit is not really used well. The story is still too slow for reaching 40 chapters. I had expected the mc to be much stronger by now. The story is just a bit too slow and concentrating on irrelevant stuff.

This was disappointing. I was excited about a jumper in marvel. But then Harley Quinn came along for no reason and she was chosen as his mate by God. The MC having no choice what so ever. His personality is also not really appealing to read. No problems with it, but just not worth reading about him. Good Luck with that pairing though. Definitely not for me.

The second one is a new one with better grammar.

Seriously! There are three version of this story on Webnovel now. They also have better translation. Check those out or put more effort in your grammar and spelling.

Alright! The low rating is for absolute stupidity after chapter 20. He works hard for all his powers the replicates it and gives them to Shri after meeting her for an hour. It just way to stupid to even elaborate this point. I could not read further. Think more about your stories next time.

Is this a copy of the one on fanfiction by YugiXtian? Are you the same author? Because that has been stuck on chapter 35 for 5 years. Did you get permission?