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Adopted?

To most people, this may seem how parents should act for their children, but to Shun Long who had never felt familial love before, these actions were invaluable to him.

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I want to give likes to all of you, but it's going to mess the numbers, so here are my likes to all of you.

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I want to give likes to all of you, but it's going to mess the numbers, so here are my likes to all of you.

After they finished their food, they started their daily work but little did they know that this would be the last day of Rock's life.

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Damn, I wanna give likes but it's gonna mess the numbers so here are my likes for all of you.

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Damn, I wanna give likes but it's gonna mess the numbers so here are my likes for all of you.

''Haa kid.. I knew you wouldn't bring breakfast with you again. My wife gave me extra again today so let's share it together.'' as soon as he finished his sentence he grabbed a plastic bag and took out 2 big water bottles along with 2 sandwiches and 4 rice balls. He split them at 2 portions and gave one to Rock.

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Monarch of Time

Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian

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I am enjoying the novel and not usually looking at errors, only the ones that take me a few seconds to understand what's going on. xD

"Well, there are a lot of things I could do while I'm here. I don't even know if those guys were telling the truth. Besides, I will soon get enough money from you guys that I probably won't even know what to do with them so I don't need their resources. And I will also have to prove my loyalty afterwards. If I have to go through such a process, I'd rather do it in the kingdom. Plus, the man name Elashin seemed brainwashed," Evin replied.

Shades of the New World

Shades of the New World

Fantasy · NakedApron

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named*

"Well, there are a lot of things I could do while I'm here. I don't even know if those guys were telling the truth. Besides, I will soon get enough money from you guys that I probably won't even know what to do with them so I don't need their resources. And I will also have to prove my loyalty afterwards. If I have to go through such a process, I'd rather do it in the kingdom. Plus, the man name Elashin seemed brainwashed," Evin replied.

Shades of the New World

Shades of the New World

Fantasy · NakedApron

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or maybe they have gotten used to it...

The horn's color related to different Worlds, similar to how mages would get a tint of such color when they were using the energy of a World. Red was Fire, light blue was Water, beige was Earth, Storm was colorless, Darkness was black, Light was white, Space was golden, Thoughts was silver, Heavy was dark purple, Time was dark blue, Life was Pink and Emotions was different for everyone.

Shades of the New World

Shades of the New World

Fantasy · NakedApron

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Why not just switch the words in every chapter and tell the readers that are up to date that you have changed it?

The horn's color related to different Worlds, similar to how mages would get a tint of such color when they were using the energy of a World. Red was Fire, light blue was Water, beige was Earth, Storm was colorless, Darkness was black, Light was white, Space was golden, Thoughts was silver, Heavy was dark purple, Time was dark blue, Life was Pink and Emotions was different for everyone.

Shades of the New World

Shades of the New World

Fantasy · NakedApron

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Remove did.

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Shades of the New World

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"He's gonna kill him."

"Mom, do you know who created these alphabets and words?" Evin decided to ask, just in case.

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Shades of the New World

Fantasy · NakedApron

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Even though you didn't actually change it...

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Shades of the New World

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No Problem!

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so I'd guess

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brightly.

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Unnessesary comma.

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