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Moshinko
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be sure to check the author not for this one about the future of the book
ch 26 Essence Bond
Unlimited RPG System
Sci-fi · Moshinko
yea no problem, iIhave a discord link in the author notes of each of my chapters!
ch 0 1 URS
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Sci-fi · Moshinko
yea, unfortunately it's a lot quicker to read than it is to write haha
ch 17 Powering Up
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Sci-fi · Moshinko
quick question, what do you think so far? i have chapters plannednto release throughout October and rewrote the story, just checking for feedback
ch 0 8 Research and Development
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Sci-fi · Moshinko
actually, laid is past for lay, and lay is past for lie. it's confusing since the difference between lay and lie in this manner is who is doing the action. if i lay the cup down, the cup doesn't lie itself, you do it for it. If he does the action of laying, then he lay down. lay is past of lie, but it isn't connected to the verb lay that i mentioned earlier. but that may sound weird so you could switch to the past participle form of lie, which is lain and say something like "he had lain down" you wouldnt say laid down because that would mean something was laid down by something else, but he isn't doing the action so you could say lay or had lain for him lying down.
'At the very least he would be close to reaching the Veteran stage.' Looking at Valyr before her, Arcenne had a feeling that this possibility was the worst case scenario. With how he had barely eked out a pass to the Veteran stage while fighting against her, she was certain that Valyr's true limits lied at the Veteran stage, perhaps greater.
MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith
Games · TrueDawn
dark souls
On the other hand, the experience in Greater Beyond was considered a type of universal currency. The methods of gaining experience were still the same, which was either through killing monsters, doing quests, or doing miscellaneous tasks that gave experience. However, rather than having the experience be automatically allocated towards one's level or one's skills, the person would instead have the choice of allocating it towards their level or towards their skills.
MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith
Games · TrueDawn
god made him unable to train his mind with kana, so he wouldn't rely on mainly magic, and I assume spells are directions for mana, but he already does that to an extent with his current control of mana, ski don't think the god made it impossible to do spells, just train his mind
'He used Mana Step!'
Sword God in a World of Magic
Fantasy · Warmaisach
unless his sword has that ability when mana is injected
Shang, disguised as one of the Numbers, looked at the walls and was surprised how quickly the Mages of this world managed to build such gigantic walls.
Sword God in a World of Magic
Fantasy · Warmaisach
I was just about to say this
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Sword God in a World of Magic
Fantasy · Warmaisach
know this is random, saw your comment as the most recent comment, I have moved to a different country since I have last updated the book and have been working, I have been wanting to continue, just curious on what you think of the book so far or what issues you see in it, I'm thinking if rewriting the story and continuing it after my new computer setup is finished and when I have time after work.
[Dantian created, user Qi Storage has been depleted due to the creation. Photographic Memory has evolved to Omniscience lvl. 1]
Unlimited RPG System
Sci-fi · Moshinko
talk about cliff hangers. I gotta know what's going to happen
ch 264 Enemies are bound to meet on a narrow road
Re: Evolution Online
Fantasy · Yolohy
yea, I realized I copied and pasted the wrong skill list from my notes
sorry for the delay, the last week has been a little bit crazy, thanks for your comments, they always motivate me!
ch 0 6 Blade Fish Sect 16
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Sci-fi · Moshinko
I plan to kind of have different paths for people to get stronger, it's just that the first planet is eastern inspired. I don't plan on adding a lot of eastern fantasy, and I plan yo have him travel to a few other planets in the near future. I want this system to show how adaptable it is in different environments, which will allow him to thrive in any area.
ch 0 5 Recollection 15
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Sci-fi · Moshinko
yep, this is part of building his character, you learn more from your mistakes than you do from your success [img=recommend]
Kaz was standing there, eyes glazed, unable to process what happened. The man that he so desperately wanted to help was lying there in a puddle of his own blood. The three cultivators started to send fists at Kaz, who in his daze, had his body almost instinctively dodge the attacks. Kaz's body was moving due to the other Dantian while he was still trying to process what happened.
Unlimited RPG System
Sci-fi · Moshinko
Sorry for the delay, had to plan ahead quite a bit before doing this chapter because of how the meeting in the beginning went.
ch 0 1 Godly Summit 6
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Sci-fi · Moshinko
thanks for the comment, I will hopefully have a lot of time during the break to make a lot of chapters and story board, I have the world building kind of done and have a direction in mind, but I only a few chapters ahead in planning currently so that's why I was able to release 5 in 2 days, I was also trying to keep chapters to around 1k words per chapter, does it feel too short to you?
ch 0 1 A New Type of Energy 5
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Sci-fi · Moshinko
no, iIhave other stories but iIdont plan on starting them for now, just this one
ch 26 Essence Bond
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Sci-fi · Moshinko