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Well i read all the chapters released till Now. The writing quality is superb. The translation is also really good quality. Its just that i would recommend the translator to take up some stories with good plotline and with less elements of addrenaline rush thats generally offered by traditional Xianxia. This story certainly has been polluted by such anxiety inducing writings by the author .

Guyz, dont read fanfic if you want logic in it. There are thousands of thousands story books written by famous authors. Fanfiction signifies a fan basing his stories on a fiction along with his opinions on how the fictional story could be

i have not read even one chapter. But this story is among the many one which is written in a diary style i.e i did this, i did that. This type of stories are not engaging even if the content is gold. Please improve 😭

exactly. I also think so. The premise was he travels to different worlds and complete missions. When he came to danmachi he has become a lacky for everyone. Although both mc and Ais joined at the same time, it feels like everyone tried to mother ais but no one is actually concerned about the mc and mc doesn't care. Also Mc strength is limited by always accompanying Ais.

Mr_Night Go back to sleep. Staying awake throughout the night can cause hallucinations and can affect your mental health. This type of ppl become as stupid as izuku midoriya from bnha

I remember reading a chapter of Minato template in Marvel 🤔

Hello please read what you are writing and fix the mistakes.These mistakes are quite easy to notice and difficult to ignore . .......,..................

Also its in First person, Doesn't feel like a story. Its a POV through and Through

All chapters are spammed with useless words to increase word count . These stories are all over the place in this site and are really misleading

Author nerfed the administrative powers of the mc. Mc reincarnated, join marines , became admiral and then usual 5 elders cliche happened and he got transferred to mary geoise as a celestial dragon guard. LOL. Its a waste of time for me i guess

Exactly. The story should have ended ryt after Naruto and sasuke defeated and sealed kaguya. The boruto plotline is yuck.

Dude you found grammer in there? To me it looks like college notes Just imp points has been noted down

Not my cup of tea haha.for some reason I don't like monologe/pov style writing................................................... ....................................

Wow typical xianxia style writing. Starting with being trash. Once he defeats someone, someone else comes to fight him, he is arrogant , everyone is arrogant. Haa even a lvl 90 came to kill him . Useless Sh*t.