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male LV 11I sort of don't like it but I can't help it either.
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I understand what you are trying to say馃槀I'll try to add more of them in later chapters.
ch 16 Warfare Is More Complex
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You got it[img=Feeling it]
Haha, some would surely know.
The Devas collected the sage's bones, and the Supreme Being crafted the weapon which would about an end for the Great Evil's atrocities from them.
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How did this one feel?That's something i think I'll change a little, outcome will remain the same though.
"Admiral Zhang, if my memory serves me right. You have a young daughter, don't you?" Luo Yin said as a grin adorned his countenance.
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馃ぃ馃ぃ
Luo Yin then continued, "An unprecedented operation can't have a track record. Its record will begin with the coming battle, will it not?"
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Lol馃槀馃槀
"This one's not just incompetent, he's an imbecile," Luo Yin concluded in his thoughts. "Just as it has always been, the world won't change. I will change it."
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Hehe there's not many woman in the Military馃槀
A restoration bath was an exquisite marvel, a vast basin crafted from the rare and precious Vitality Wood, brimming with Medicinal Liquid to a depth of thirty centimeters.
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I thought so too back when i was editting but well, I was too lazy to make that change as it would have taken quite a lot of time馃槀
ch 12 Unfamiliar Globe World
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Well, yeah. But I still need to make some stuff clear before continuing that as such I'm Editting right now. Once it is done, this would look better.
"We have awaited your arrival," she intoned with unwavering devotion, her voice carrying a solemn conviction. "The hour has come for your blade of justice to descend upon this world, reshaping its very fabric into a new era of purity and righteousness."
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Well, yeah.
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I see. Good to know that you liked it.
In the Infinite Planes of Existence. Several Beings came to fame while several fell to obscurity, several Beings ascended the throne while several got banished.
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Well, that was all I could do to just somehow give a quick look at the world.
In the Infinite Planes of Existence. Several Beings came to fame while several fell to obscurity, several Beings ascended the throne while several got banished.
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Okay I'll go through it and get back to you.
"Secondly, when it comes to moving from one area to the next, our force, which is located in the center, is able to take a shorter route than any of them. In order for them to move to another Area without fighting us, they will have to make a wide detour. This makes both time and distance our allies."
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That would make a whole lot to edit. I suppose I'll try to do that but I'm not sure if I can pull it off for now.
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Very well.
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That is right. To some extent, I had made a group of characters with their own ideologies to lead the story but realizing that I couldn't go far with it, I changed the story. In fact, I'm still making variations to make it better.
Any other Questions?
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Pretty much, yeah馃槅
Luo Yin's nostrils detected the faint tang of an almost imperceptible odor, one that soldiers in the Warships were familiar with.
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Well, I'll be working on the realms later on. This isn't the main thing right now after all.
Greater Circle (Peak).
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True[img=Unalived]
Only Yang, the youngest among them, however, displayed a keen interest in Luo Yin's explanation, his light-aquamarine eyes gleaming with curiosity.
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