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How do you use it as a rub? Im a caregiver and my carereceiver loves ginger as food item but we have no idea how to use it as a rub!
It was clearly ginger! Bai Qingqing secretly grumbled that the beastmen were weird for using their seasonings as medicine instead of using it on food.
Beauty and the Beasts
Fantasy · White-Headed Dream
Really?? How mich does she use???
It was clearly ginger! Bai Qingqing secretly grumbled that the beastmen were weird for using their seasonings as medicine instead of using it on food.
Beauty and the Beasts
Fantasy · White-Headed Dream
What’s a Phoenix body?? Also: More body shaming??
Before long, more phoenix-like females walked over, causing her to break out of her thoughts.
Beauty and the Beasts
Fantasy · White-Headed Dream
Im REALLY glad you didn’t have fat shaming so much in the comic version. This paragraph would’ve made me stop reading it; a shame because I actually love the comic version. It was completely unnecessary to go that far and you’ve completely alienated a (probably large) portion of your readers. Most of those women are Moms so naturally their bodies changed. Also wearing tube tops and skirts must be a tradional garb worn by women if the majority of the females are wearing them. Since children are so prized it would make sense that women being larger from having given bIrth would probably be highly cherished. I realize Bai is probably highly critical due to the influences from her home but I’m a little she isnt more culturally sensitive in regards to a completely unknown peoples. I actually am surprised by her lack of bodily changes after becoming a mom in the comic too but its no where near the disappointment I felt from reading this paragraph. I know its assinine and hurtful to say this but in all fairness as I’m not the only one upset by this paragraph it might behoove you to go back and rewrite/delete it.
That woman over there—don't wear clothing that exposes your midriff if you have such a big belly. You look hideous with all that fat around your waist. And the woman beside you—your breasts are so saggy that they reach her belly button! Quickly wrap them up! Did you all run out of cloth? Don't make your tube top so tight. You have so much fat everywhere, and yet your chest is like a runway! What's up with that?
Beauty and the Beasts
Fantasy · White-Headed Dream
About time! For being a University student ahe sure is dense!!
Even without using the phone service, she could contact her uncle without visiting him and his family because she would send him a letter! All she had to do was to find where the mails were kept.
Letters to Romeo.
Fantasy · ash_knight17
His “Happy Place”?
"You ... are... enough .. for me..." said Mars hoarsely. His manhood was throbbing for release. He couldn't wait to enter his happy place!
The Cursed Prince
Fantasy · Missrealitybites
It worked! I can access chapters again!! Ooo Mars has a decision to make but more than that who would he sentence to death to try it?!!
ch 77 What If... The Curse Is Broken?
The Cursed Prince
Fantasy · Missrealitybites
I can’t read past this chapter ?! Ive got plenty of credits but the book wont move!
ch 76 Is The Tea Cancelled?
The Cursed Prince
Fantasy · Missrealitybites
I hope there’s more to come! I’m really enjoying this book!
ch 0 3 A Rock in Space
Loki And The Hidden World
Fantasy · Zion_Paton
Definitely this one!
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The Cursed Prince
Fantasy · Missrealitybites
Just turned 40 myself a month ago and Im STILL freaking out. you’re not alone. *hugs*
ch 28 His Woman **
The Cursed Prince
Fantasy · Missrealitybites
You don’t need to have the song in there. I know; Ive done it too but my creative writing teacher told me that simply ”it adds nothing that cant be said by just writing the song title. How the music makes the character react should take precidence... plus you could get sued.”
ch 0 7 chapter 7
A Bride for Prince Loki
Fantasy · Tiffany_Twork
Im up to the 100s+ in the comic and I really wish Harvey was another hubby. Hes just an adorable cinnamon roll !
ch 0 8 The Condiments That Are Being Treated as Medicinal Herb
Beauty and the Beasts
Fantasy · White-Headed Dream