Haskel_Criswell

1yr

Replied to Daniel_Choritz

Wow your whole attitude about this book is terrible. For someone who only read one chapter you sure do have a lot of opinions. Next time don’t comment your grammar is terrible

ch 0 1 Prelude

The Tale of the Void Emperor

Fantasy · LivingVoid

Haskel_Criswell

1yr

Replied to fig02

Good grammar? What world do you live in?

Unrivaled System

Fantasy · XxEagleNightxX

Haskel_Criswell

1yr

Posted

The story would be so much better if the author had actually checked it for grammatical errors and had it edited. Unfortunately the author did neither of those things. The writing quality is terrible. My 8 year old could do better.