LuciensThe - Profile

By far one of the best novels in Webnovel. I've read so many that I'm dull to the clichés of cultivation novels, but this is something without any of those bland clichés. I am honestly surprised by the quality of the story and it's writing. MC's character development is done really well. I really hope this novel continues it's current progress for a long time to come.

Right off the bat, This is an excellent read. but it does have some issues : 1. It's very slow, first readers have to focus a bit to understand what's happening for the first 30 chapters and some of the later arcs as well. 2. Its advisable to take your time while reading as even binge reading gets a bit confusing. 3. The author has to work on the pacing of the novel. its just slightly off, you should give extra breathing room to the readers. 4.The story arcs are longer by atleast 10 chapters for each arc, which takes too much out of the readers. 5. The world building is really good, though we could have an explanation a bit earlier, character design is done well. I hope this helps, it is an excellent read do not miss this novel.

true, nationalism is one of the only things that could be changed in this novel to propel this to a better audience.

I have given 3 stars to this novel because of two severe problems I have with its writing : 1. it overly panders to nationalism unnecessarily which is just off putting. 2. the idea that the wilder beasts and other worlds all share the same language is stupid beyond belief. if not for these two reasons this novel would be an actual good read with an interesting idea. Also, the author's writing feels too much of a male chauvinist. it would be best to tone that down. I really do hope the author doesn't just cater to a single nation's audience and has a much more inclusive mind so the following chapters can be much more .... um... readable?

there are many things wrong in this novel, but the harem is truly off-putting, it started off well without particular directive towards the harem genre, but as the story progresses the characters are converted into typical , dependent on MC , harem women . this ruins a lot of potential that this has.