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Reborn in the Warring States Period

Anime & Comics · Pengincognito

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the surge of character and screaming alerted several guards

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Reborn in the Warring States Period

Anime & Comics · Pengincognito

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I like this story so far but some the sentence structure keeps ruining my enjoyment because some sentences don't make much sense

ch 12 Immeasurable Power

Reborn in the Warring States Period

Anime & Comics · Pengincognito

Taoist_Heavyfoot

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it's good but wish some of the sentences were sentenced better for example the flight took hours instead of the travel took hours

ch 10 Enlisting

Chaos' Heir

Fantasy · Eveofchaos

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at least it not another gluttony skill that steals skills

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Reborn as an Evolving Monster(old account)

Fantasy · Adam_K47

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good story needs grammar corrections

ch 23 Chapter 22: Witcher

The Witcher:Raging Fire

Book&Literature · TacetIrae

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Good story so far keep up the good work👍

ch 29 The fear.

Reincarnated as a Girl in a World of Cultivation.

Fantasy · Tennouji_Kotarou

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More please

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Anime & Comics · Dao_of_Melancholy

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Thanks for the great chapter 👍

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Anime & Comics · Dao_of_Melancholy

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Thanks for the new chapter 👍

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Thanks for the chapter👍

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Anime & Comics · Dao_of_Melancholy

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Keep up the good work 👍

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Anime & Comics · Dao_of_Melancholy

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Thanks for the great chapter hope you will start writing again.👍

ch 88 #87 Survival Test 11

Leisure Life: Classroom of The Elite

Anime & Comics · Felix9713

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Not bad so far continue the good work 👍

ch 0 7 Welcoming Feast pt.2

Catlyn Ollivander (Harry Potter)

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