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Why didn’t he use rasenshuriken?

How else could the woman see him other than deceitful shameless opportunist? He blackmailed her right off the bat, ruined her efforts and swagger out like a champ.

Guess how many times authors used the word “intricate’?

These were some of the most useless chapters in the story. The women came, threatened, then died.

Honestly, for a person who knows almost nothing about Star Wars series like me, it’s very difficult to connect what’s happening in the novel. I have some knowledge on ObiWan, Anakin, Padme, Luke and Yoda, Sidious and little about Ashoka, and don’t know anything else. I don’t understand more than half of what you’ve written. Moreover you mixed it with Mass Effect, which again I know nothing about. So, although it’s somewhat entertaining to read, grammar mistakes and the narrative flying all over the place make it difficult for me to enjoy the novel. But, I always respect new authors trying their own fanfics and works! Good luck!

Come on man, upload em chapters faster! Pretty please?

Dude, it’s a ninja world, might makes right! 😁

Man, you’re very good at everything except the speed. Women must love you! But readers tend to hate that 😁 Your slow release makes me want to help you write faster, edit your chapters or help you brainstorm ideas for you. I think that is the sign of the very good author😉

A huge THANK YOU And as no one would say to a man PLEASE BE FASTER releasing the chapters

IVE BEEN WAITING FOR YOU, ARAAAAAKI’

Hey’! At least the dude provides what’s needed - warmth, feelings, protection, future 😁

Soooo! Sweet Home Alabama?

Just order the animals to eat his body. Most school don’t have Cameras, alt here’s no direct evidence in case they killed him in school. Teacher and students have disagreements most of the times, so a little fight wouldn’t arouse too much suspicion from police.

Where’s dem pics dudee

And here I am! Mate, I can say that your work is shaping up just as good as DAD, if not better! Very interesting to read 😁 The only thing I don’t like is him being very dense next to women, please change that asap, no need for shyness, for gods sake, as Mary would have said. What about Paige, genius girl? Would you introduce her? Maybe make her a bit older, so that she can be with PJ?

I think Wanda and Pietro were mutants, experimented by Hydra? Ava Start from SHIELD. Not to mention if it’s a Cinematic Universe, Fantastic Four, Xavier’School, Magnetos Brotherhood seem to fit description as well?