Not_Othinus - Profile

To be honest I don't really have much knowledge on One Piece but so far the story is good. Writing - 5 stars I'm not good at english, but this kind of quality is easy for me to understand. I dunno what the english speaker will think about this story. Character - 5 Stars This is the best thing about this story, despite how short this story is the three characters that we know so far are good in term of personality and their relationship between each other are well written. Especially Ann and Luke, I don't know how you will make this as a harem because their relationship is one of the neutral relationship out of all the Harem fanfic. Story Development - 4 stars Not much happening right now, there are time gap between each chapter. It feel more like a slice of life series with plot. I think that is what the author want to do with her story at least for the early chapters. Updating - 5 Stars This work updated daily, each chapter was only around 1 to 2k (I think?). The author updated on different time frame but it usually 1 chapter per day. World Building - 3 Stars So far this is the weakest thing about this novel, not that the world building in this fic is suck but the world building in this story is rather lacking. Hope you will improve it. P.S: I hope you will make each chapter longer while maintaining the quality. But then again it just my selfish request, no need to think much about it. Just do what you like.