Mario_Alonso

27d

Commented

author? is this dead?

ch 0 9 Cap 9

Watch your story on video for all universes

Anime & Comics · Darknight558

Mario_Alonso

1mth

Commented

Presentation

Tycoon of Video Games

Video Games · NewComer714

Mario_Alonso

2mth

Commented

komi shouko

Insert [Anime, Manga, Manhwa.. waifus you want to see in this fiction]

Systematic Multiverse Harem

Anime & Comics · Pinto_sh

Mario_Alonso

2mth

Commented

I prefer this. You could make a 2nd fanfic where you follow the pokemon grunt route. Loving the story by the way.

Option 1 - Let The Story Proceed How It Should According To The Original Games.

Playing PokeMMO In Another World

Video Games · DevilHanu

Mario_Alonso

2mth

Commented

Yes! This is fantastic, I hope you can do this author.

I would like to give a early warning to everyone, that I will be introducing oc both friend and antagonists early in the story with even oc plots as many things were left out by Kishimoto. And I've always wanted to play with the Naruto story in my own way, rather than using generic fanfiction plot. So If this isn't your preferred style, consider yourself warned.

Naruto: Blood & Pleasure

Anime & Comics · NexusPrimodius

Mario_Alonso

3mth

Commented

but... couldnt you live for a month with 1 pokedollar?? does this mean that an egg is worth 15000 months of food...

Undeterred, I engaged in a vigorous round of haggling, driving the price down to a more reasonable 15,000 Pokédollars.

Pokemon: Trainer SI

Anime & Comics · KK9494

Mario_Alonso

3mth

Commented

The chapters? By the way, I love your stroy author. Keep it up!

ch 371 Innovative

Tycoon of Video Games

Video Games · NewComer714

Mario_Alonso

3mth

Commented

So, tell me. What powers can be given to Riser Phenex?

Riser Phenex? DXD SI. Multicross?

Anime & Comics · Kaioshin

Mario_Alonso

3mth

Posted

It is a bit below average...WQ is somewhat choppy. The author doesnt speak English all that well and there are too many chinese expressions that ruin the flow and mood. There are even statements that contradict each other. Still, it is readable.SD is okay. Some dude is transmigrated to the year 1975. Though we are told the protagonist is someone that came to NY looking for opportunities he feels like a standard chinese story MC. Anyways, still okay.CD. Very unlikeable. As I mentioned before, MC Feels like a generic chinese protagonist. Other characters behave irrationally or outright weird several times. US. Very good. Author seems motivated and is pumping those chapters out.WB. It is okay. Author did in fact research abojt the things that he talks about but ghe way people are makes the world background feel weird, destroying the inmersion. Overall a 2,8. As an advice, I would try to avoid chinese cliches and behaviors when writing in a western setting. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp] Anyways, have a nice day author.

King of games in the United States

Anime & Comics · ElReyCoronado18112

Mario_Alonso

4mth

Commented

Police I swear to God, not simping for a Child. (Couldnt find a gif with the song lyrics, so I chose the next best gif.)

'But FBI, I swear to God I only see her as my little sister when she was a kid!!'.

A life with the Author

Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn

Mario_Alonso

4mth

Commented

nope

No.

Starting Today I'll Work As A City Lord

Anime & Comics · GreenBlue17

Mario_Alonso

4mth

Commented

An apartment costs as little as a pokemon with unknown potential.

The cheapest one had a rent of 700 Poke, while the most expensive one cost 2000 Poke. The buying price, at least the ones that could be bought, was ranging from 280.000 to 650.000 Poke.

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Anime & Comics · Azrail93

Mario_Alonso

4mth

Commented

1. Halo X Warhammer

GATE: Thus The Imperium of Man Fought There

Anime & Comics · Ray_Vorhard_2199

Mario_Alonso

4mth

Commented

i would love to see a character who is older than original MC.

While we are still approaching the end of this story, write to me in the comments. What elements would you like to be present in the new story? Which aspects of this story do you think should be improved for the next one, and which should be minimized?

BTTH Life Simulator System

Anime & Comics · Kisshot

Mario_Alonso

4mth

Commented

NUT

And if anyone could orchestrate such an act, then it had to be a Supreme Being or someone powerful enough, and in his case it surely had to be Him.

DC UNIVERSE: Reborn after the Big Bang

Anime & Comics · David_555

Mario_Alonso

5mth

Commented

I hope it says like this

This book has been deleted.

Mario_Alonso

6mth

Commented

Dont worry, in fact it would be quite weird if you released a new console so soon. After all, what would happen to those who still owned the 8 bit console? Its been just a year or two since they bought it yet they have to buy a new one to be able to play new games? This is why consoles had a 5 year life expectancy. Loving your story by the way. Have some powerstones handsome author.

[I apologize if some readers have expressed concerns about the pace of my writing and the delay in releasing the 16-bit and Gameboy. However, given that I am currently publishing three chapters per day, I believed it would be more manageable. In Chapter 151, the main character will finally unveil the 16-bit and Gameboy, along with the video games they have been preparing for a long time during the ongoing research on the 16-bit and Gameboy. I'm sorry if it seemed like I was dragging the story; perhaps it's because I was moving too quickly and publishing three chapters daily, which may have affected the pace of my writing.]