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You could use the villains that I know are shown in the comics, not all of them are great villains but there is mention of some that you can use from time to time to fill in, there are also the spin off comics of invincible that can help further expand the universe of this same , or use drama, the rex and eve thing can be used to complete a mini arc and make it a good arc

I agree with this guy aside, the protagonist becomes an idiot with his girlfriend because he cheats on her with a woman when he cheats on her once every adventure

It is obvious that Orochinaru took the most dangerous jutsus while with a genjutsu he deceived the village, it could also be Danzo trying to destroy forbidden power or take it away or Itachi trying to create a more peaceful Konoha

Thanks for listening to my comment, I suggest you start with the comics of the current saga since the Archie ones follow the television series and the games.

Author, do you know Sonic? Have you not thought about making a story that follows the plot of the comics? I feel like if it were you it would be interesting to see what you would do with it.

I have a doubt, Padme and Annie got married but what happened to the protagonist in all this wedding? Will you leave it like that? Because apparently Annie loves the protagonist and Padme will have his son.

Tengo una idea y si usas esas historias en tu otro fic el del gordo aun se podría ya que si usan aun magia y fantasía no lo dejaste tan desarrollado para no poner cosas de la vida real, ey curioso usas lo viejo para dar algo nuevo como con McDonald y sus comida

Traps just that word you already put a little cloth better use it

Poison ivy x harley para el haren

Put Lyn from Tech Jacket in the harem, we already have the blue beetle in DC, we don't use the fake Iron Man Peter Quill, please, if you don't like this trick on Lyn, please give it a like