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Yeah it would've😆
However, the unknown reiatsu signature was getting dangerously close.
Bleach: Innate Control
Anime & Comics · Red_Roman
Why risk it?
However, the unknown reiatsu signature was getting dangerously close.
Bleach: Innate Control
Anime & Comics · Red_Roman
This guy needs a therapist. And Bruce is absolutely correct with his decision to bail.
"When I fought you I thought that you were brave, fearless, strong", Brandon continued, "But no, you're nothing but a coward. You fear to use the power that you've been given. I was born with my powers, and you know what it's brought me?! Nothing but pain! I can't hold a normal person's hands! I can't speak to other people without even feeling like killing them! I'm a real monster! I'm a demon! I'm a freak! And the worst part?! I DON'T EVEN WANT TO BE LIKE THIS! WHAT YOU HAVE IS A PRIVILEGE! A PRIVILEGE TO ACTUALLY FEEL NORMAL!"
Marvel's Brightburn
Movies · Necro_
Hueco Mundo is practically an endless world with billions upon billions of Hollows...I'm actually shocked there were so little cannon Vasto Lordes, even with the tough conditions to become one.
Another Vasto Lorde of my court and a commander of my army stepped forth.
Bleach: Innate Control
Anime & Comics · Red_Roman
Realistically, I can see the ability having a less sensitive passive mode and a much more sensitive active mode.
However, just before I could vocalize my order, my Pesquisa pinged off an unfamiliar reiatsu.
Bleach: Innate Control
Anime & Comics · Red_Roman
I'm not sure the process will benefit him. In the cannon it's implied that the Visored are stronger than their pre-hollowfied selves (and the average Captains), but every showing they've had proved otherwise.
"And if we're lucky enough, we could have perfect test subjects to truly study Hollow reiatsu."
Bleach: Innate Control
Anime & Comics · Red_Roman
I appreciate the feedback. Your right about this being practice for an original novel. Setting this story up in the Bleach universe makes so that I really can't see this story being more than 200 chapters. As I mentioned before, I'll try to find a comprise between the two styles so that I can get in the practice while still giving Riku the journey he deserves.
ch 20 Chapter 20: Welcome to Hueco Mundo.
Bleach: Innate Control
Anime & Comics · Red_Roman
Thanks, I missed that.
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Bleach: Innate Control
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🤷🏾♂️
ch 20 Chapter 20: Welcome to Hueco Mundo.
Bleach: Innate Control
Anime & Comics · Red_Roman
Sure, maybe after a few chapters.
ch 20 Chapter 20: Welcome to Hueco Mundo.
Bleach: Innate Control
Anime & Comics · Red_Roman
Thanks for the feedback. On one hand I want more POVs for the story, but on the other I don't want to dwell on those POVs for too long. I'll probably find the sweet spot after a while.✌🏽
ch 20 Chapter 20: Welcome to Hueco Mundo.
Bleach: Innate Control
Anime & Comics · Red_Roman
Yep, I only noticed that in a couple of chapters. I have a comment or author's note to address that.
The dispatch was going well. Deploying a rookie was an unnecessary risk, but Vice-Captain Matsumoto's order pretty much tied my hands. However, knowing that the rookie has achieved Shikai, and a particularly powerful Shikai at that, is a small consolation. Apparently, the Vice-Captain wants to promote him to the Tenth Seat if his performance in this dispatch is satisfactory. I'm inclined to support the idea if only because the current Tenth Seat is an incompetent fool, and the remaining low-level officers are wholly unworthy. Thinking of it like this, I'm starting to understand Vice-Captain Matsumoto's haste.
Bleach: Innate Control
Anime & Comics · Red_Roman
I really don't want to come off as whiny, but it's just getting hard to ignore.
But even she had never seen a pair of eyes like Elijah's.
The Wanderer - A X-Men Crossover Fan-Fiction
Others · GodOfFreedom
This is getting a bit silly. The way that every character is so intimidated by this teenager is getting weird. Ancient existences like Selene, who we would think have seen it and done it all, seem to experience existential crises every time the MC looks at them angrily. It's just getting a bit difficult to suspend my belief.
But even she had never seen a pair of eyes like Elijah's.
The Wanderer - A X-Men Crossover Fan-Fiction
Others · GodOfFreedom
It's been pointed out to me that marvel lore includes destiny controlling characters, so is this an AU without them or is the Ancient One just ignorant?
Now listening to the Ancient One's words, Jean couldn't help but marvel at the wisdom her simple words carried while noticing how Elijah seemed to have found the answers that he had been looking for.
The Wanderer - A X-Men Crossover Fan-Fiction
Others · GodOfFreedom
Going by how weird marvel more is, I wouldn't be surprised if there was some personification of fate flying around
"So just because we can't understand something, doesn't mean that there is no explanation for it.", she said, her calm and clear voice ringing in my ears as I listened intently to her words, "Now, you could devote yourself to finding an answer to all your questions, but I imagine that life would become pretty tedious and monotone without things to surprise you."
The Wanderer - A X-Men Crossover Fan-Fiction
Others · GodOfFreedom
The Quincy are about to be exterminated. In that climate, all it takes is for a noble to get a report about a Quincy-like Shinigami existing before our MC is either killed or imprisoned.
ch 19 Chapter 19: Getting the ball rolling (Final).
Bleach: Innate Control
Anime & Comics · Red_Roman
I'm sure he could, he would just have to deal with all the alarms and traps that doing so will trigger. Oh, and old man Yama's big 'fuck-off' flames.
Eventually, this snowballed into an 'unhackable' safe for dangerous spells. And I'm not willing to spend upwards of a year trying to break past the annoying seal.
Bleach: Innate Control
Anime & Comics · Red_Roman
Thanks
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Bleach: Innate Control
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Honestly, I wanted to extend the fight quite a bit. But it still ended up being either super contrived or too repetitive.
ch 22 Chapter 22: You fool! You activated my trap card.
Bleach: Innate Control
Anime & Comics · Red_Roman