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Moments 92
Rudranarayan_Nanda
I think author should add another American show here.
Rudranarayan_Nanda
Write your chapters yourself sometimes. You use too much AI so much so that the whole chapter including character interaction feels bland.
Rudranarayan_Nanda
It's a good chapter feels like written by a human no a robot
Rudranarayan_Nanda
Too much philosophical dialogue ,it's getting boring and repeating.
Rudranarayan_Nanda
It's getting boring, there is no event no new characters or even existing characters don't interact each more . It's giving me a felling like I am reading some kind of information.
Rudranarayan_Nanda
Again he should be 14 already I think.
Rudranarayan_Nanda
I think he should be 14 by now
Rudranarayan_Nanda
Again I think his age is wrong.
Rudranarayan_Nanda
I think he should be 14 years old or maybe I am wrong.
I have read all the 47 chapters, here is my review. First of all thank you author for the great work. The story is good but there are some issues in writing though because most of the writing is done by AI so. In starting chapters the story wasn't so bad dialogue were ok felt less robotic but after the start of the college arc dialogues become robotic,repetitive and most of all too philosophical. Then came the death of George Sr. chapter which was I think author wrote himself because it was very good and chapters after that also got better but I still think it needs more human editing. There is some flaws in story also because in young Sheldon there was not only main cast but many other characters and they had distinct personality but here author only shown main group with very little of other characters. It's ok if author can't write too many characters so I think he should introduce CHARACTERS FROM OTHER AMERICAN TV SHOWS.
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