Gene_Guirand - Profile

I need the author to stop explaining plotlines that he intends to reveal later on. It's brilliant writing already and if people are not patient enough, so be it. Clearly the author's strength is foreshadowing. But it's getting ruined by telling us it will be explained later.

You gotta give it a chance. Perhaps he will build up to the OPness. All this chapter was, was just a glimpse

This is such an underrated novel. So well written and has me hooked. It has overtaken God of tricksters as my favorite

This seems too familiar to Reincarnation of the strongest sword God

magic vision? Why not mana vision or mana sight... rolls off the tongue much better

The writing is so good, I know the author will give Sunny his vengeance. Or have a chance to save her and not

Naw. She doesn't deserve to know

For those that disagree and felt Sunny was too harsh, you forgot an important detail. He was to give his true name to someone and yet that choice was taken away from him. Cassie deserved the harsh words.

I think Millie found evidence of something and Jeff painted the picture

it's assess the situation. Not access

shouldn't it be 98? His watch said 18 points after killing the archer. If he got 80 for killing the puppet, he should be at 98 points

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

why does this author refuse to put incidental duplicate ch. One more time and I submit a complaint

worms?

Also, I see what you were doing with the jumping offsides, but there was some missteps. It would've been better if the rookie was a linebacker. A corner would never be that close to the line of scrimmage for the hard count to be effective, he's too far to be impacted by it. More importantly a corner would only be that close if they are playing press coverage and if that's the case, they're not blitzing because they'd never get to the QB in time.

Not really. Either they're new to the game or possibly play Madden and probably not that quite good. It was a good effort but a lot of misses on concepts and rules