It's all good, keep up the good work. But there are a few wishes. Firstly, small chapters, their content is too truncated, there are few descriptions of the environment and I want to see more interaction of the character with the world. The second is a wish (or suggestion) to add well-developed friends. I believe that the orphanage will have one or two children with interesting characters and unusual quirks.
ch 0 3 Chapter 4: Childhood Days(Rewritten)
Anime & Comics · Charlie083
why not, but make it interesting!
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Anime & Comics · Excavelier
Guy don't do this
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Anime & Comics · Liarisknight
How about Mahou Sensei Negima! There are very few works in this world, it has strong enemies, interesting abilities, and if the MC is a long-lived person, then he can participate in the UQ Holder canon!
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Others · Ailzonius
Reinhardt is a good name
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Anime & Comics · Anime_Asim
Well, I understand your point of view, but it's not the same as mine. If you want to be an OP from the very beginning, then I would like to gradually develop and explore the world, rather than getting everything at once
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Anime & Comics · CommanderBullshit
aren't these wishes too boring?
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Anime & Comics · CommanderBullshit
Good chapter, keep it up
ch 0 1 [1] My Mom is Badass!
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
Reinhard is a cool name
ch 14 Thank you, Master!!
Anime & Comics · JarroLightfeather
YES YES YES YES YES
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Anime & Comics · Sadrad
Hello. Here are some ideas that you can use: 1. Build towers with monsters (like a dungeon in danmachi) for the passage of which you can get a variety of rewards ( super duper weapons, pills that strengthen the aura (think about the rewards yourself) and help make the population of Remnant stronger (new strong opponents, new allies, interesting meetings...)(there can be many towers, do not limit yourself to one)(the towers can be powered by Oz itself, it has an infinite amount of energy) 2. Monsters for the dungeon can be created using magic (this is a universal tool) or run into these towers Grimm. 3. You can build a Kingdom and develop it. 4. Build a flying city / castle/house because it's cool 5. Oz can find a super duper secret temple of the ancient god in which his powers(infinite magic power for example) will be disabled (balanced, weakened...), after passing the tests of which you can get a reward (the ability to control the grimm /the ability of the shadow monarch/ the ability to return the item to its original state for example(you will come up with)) 6. Establish schools for hunters before the canon. Use it.
ch 0 4 Grinding more and forward to Salem
TV · LeylinTheFifth
Pfft, give her that ability: Vive Memor Mortis=Acta Est Fabula-Her ability - "The Law of Eternal Return" comes from the desire to experience the unknown, and "Absolutely any end other than this is unacceptable". She nullifies all the endings that she doesn't like. At the moment of death, she says that she does not like this end, becomes a god and returns to the past, rolling back the entire metaverse to the moment while she is alive, but with the memory of her death. (the ability of the novel Dies Irae)
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Anime & Comics · ONEPUNCH
Quirks can be anything from friction control to "Absolutely any ending other than this is unacceptable" (Allows him to nullify all endings he doesn't like. At the moment of death, one can say that one does not like such an end, become a god and return to the past, rolling back the entire metaverse to the beginning; after a long life, everything repeats again in an endless cycle. This power allows you to bring back to life those who were completely erased from existence without the possibility of recovery, as well as erase any character into absolute nothingness) (lol)
ch 0 3 Chapter 4: Childhood Days(Rewritten)
MHA: The Dominator
Anime & Comics · Charlie083