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as far as i remember cersei stayed in casterly rock, so she should be with kevan, on the other hand the twyn brothers i only remember that tygett participated in the attack on king's landing, i don't know what he was doing about gerion.

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Incredible chapter, but after reading what my fellow reader expresses, I think that as he expresses that skagos as an island is not a good option, but I hardly share his idea that the correct option is Yi Ti, for what you already expressed, more than what is known about the existence of alchemists, magicians and great necromancers who inhabit the ancient empire, on the other hand I can think of three places at this time where the protagonists could go after the fall of Valyria and here I comment on the first, beyond the wall (Hardhome) currently destroyed but with equally interesting magical interests. Second The Kingdom of Sarnor (confederation of cities actually) has a poor lore but it is the place with the most war after the fall of Valirya, Internal War between cities and the arrival of invaders from the East (Dothraki). Third, the Westlands (Casterly Rock) is the easiest place I can think of to conquer the west without affecting the other realms too much and it has the advantage that some of its history is already built in, plus it's pretty cool explained, especially for those who do not like to burn one or another Lannister.

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annotation english is not my main language

I really like the story she is creating but do not rush to give her powers, I consider that it is not yet the time to throw her away with the marine dragonea and the kraques, since it is a lot of power for her at the moment, it would be better if you gave it to her when I named it as the leader of the bear island, for the rest I found the story very entertaining, thank you and keep publishing

Kakachi did not leave for a while or real electricity, but rather an attack, let's say in a way of saying it, a bullet influenced by the electric element, that is, it spurs a chakra that goes to the hairiness of its force or the quantity that I control, but it influences it with an electric nature. fast but it would have to be like a bullet its hairiness and the damage is electric an example of this is its shiden technique (English is not my main language)

Gracias por el capitulo

Según lo que a mi respeta este poder para que cypher se vuelva muy op, sino lo manejas con cuidado debe tener una debilidad ejemplos serian solo se puede ocupar una al año, tienen un dolor muy grande en la cabeza o en el alma al usarlo o cualquier otro tipo de debilidad, esta bien si lo quieres ocupar al absorbe las cosa de ser con poderes único o cosas hasi un ejemplo en lo que estoy de acuerdo con la habilidad de la espada es que después de matar a un asgardiano obtenga la habilidad de apreder magia seidr (magia de los mitos nordicos) ya que el por ser un humano(mutante) no debería poder ni siquiera aprenderlo por no tener esa energía pero cosas hací no solo poderes regalados o muchos debe tener poderes pero deben sentirse como propios que los a trabajado o es el único que los tiene no como sasuke en naruto(mayor ejemplo que se me viene a la mente) que le regalan poderes por mover un dedo por eso si absorbe a alguien con poderes que también tenga que apreder a controlarlos. Son estas unos pequeños puntos y recomendaciones, no te preocupes por la gente que se ba ya que ellos son los que se lo pierden no obligas a nadie yo me quedaré viéndola aunque no tomes mi recomendaciones en cuenta.