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ch 717 Of Sin and Virtue

Demon's Virtue

Demon's Virtue

Fantasy · DiceVR

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Thanks for the chapter

There was no way that Nelly could have been the very first Naiad.

Demon's Virtue

Demon's Virtue

Fantasy · DiceVR

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Chainmail cuirass maybe, not Chainmail curious

A black pair of gauntlets, beautifully crafted with fine rivets and craftsmanship, then a matching set of vambraces and spaulders, the shoulders of his armour were like black wolves howling towards the moon, with leather and chainmail curious, the leather black and red, the cuirass dull silver.

Devouring Monarch: Rebirth of the Profane Phoenix

Devouring Monarch: Rebirth of the Profane Phoenix

Fantasy · TheDragonSlayer

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"too fast a speed" not "too fats a speed"

"I was starting to wonder if you were even real. Guess you-" as Eiro tried to mock the crow, they listened along for a few moments, but before the Demon knew it, the bird monster's talons were less than inches away from Eiro's throat, about to wrap around his whole neck. And the crow had moved faster than before. A lot faster. They were... holding back against Eiro. Or at least, that's what it seemed like at first, but rather... he was able to notice the minuscule twitching in their leg. This was the drawback of the Three of Pentacles, the Ultimate Agility... that sort of speed would rip your body apart, so you needed the physical strength to support yourself. If you weren't strong or flexible enough, just the slightest movements at too fats a speed could make your muscles or tendons tear completely. So this speed was still too much for the crow's body. Though, if things worked out for them, that was fine. Eiro would die here, and the crow could rest, being healed and getting praised by the Devil.

Demon's Virtue

Demon's Virtue

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Maybe "demon sensed", not "demon senses"

Eiro viewed the village through the crows' eyes. The sun had just fully gone down, and the Demon senses an immense spike in magic not too far away. A carriage appeared on the road leading to the village, drawn by two hell-beasts. The carriage was moving much faster than before, as though the creature inside had already noticed that something was wrong.

Demon's Virtue

Demon's Virtue

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not "living not at" but " living not as"

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