There better not be something ridiculous like an Elder stepping in once he beats the two up completely
Shane could not help but feel a little regretful. Earlier when he had the ominous intuition, he should have trusted himself more and not engage with this guy at all.
Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
You know if I saw a kid that would give a scary look, the only reason I'd be alarmed is if they were butt ugly.
His heart almost skipped a beat due to the strong intensity of the gaze, he felt slight chills on his back.
Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
Wonder how long it'll take the MC to grow a pair and take her out of her misery when she goes a bit too far.
His words seemed to reason with her as she calmed down and looked at Oliver with a cruel glint in her eyes, she would make sure that he would become a cripple after the hunt for sure.
Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
Tier 4 at like the 1500th chapter at this rate...
He was already powerful enough to deal with Low rank Tier-4 Higher Lifeforms while being a Low Tier-3 Lord. How strong would he be once he ascended to a Higher Lifeform? How long would it take before Michael advanced to Tier-5? Wouldn't he be strong enough to overwhelm Tier-5 powerhouses while being at the 5th Tier if he continued to grow at this pace? How much stronger would his subordinates become in a few years?
Fantasy · HideousGrain
Sounds like Michael is getting 0.0001% of exp for every kill. How sad. It'll take forever for him just to get to Tier 4. It'll probably be in the 1500 chapters at this rate. Not including him likely picking up more Soultraits too making his progress even slower lol
His War Rune was far from advancing. It would take months for him to advance to the Low rank of the 3rd Tier. Of course, that was without any energy shares and without resources worth more than most ordinary territories could procure in half a year.
Fantasy · HideousGrain
I don't understand why he doesn't put some in slowly? It's going to be pretty painful from going from a 6 star to 7 star. He knows it too. better to slowly do it now then later and complain about the pain.
Michael didn't start with the creation of Extraction's 7th star right away because it was only a matter of time before the first Awakened working for him would come to request a Soultrait Upgrade. Furthermore, Extraction's potency wouldn't increase until the 7th star was completed. Hence, it didn't make a big difference even if he waited a little bit.
Fantasy · HideousGrain
Not to forgot not recognizing her son and putting her arm around his neck. Yeah that's a terrible reunion
"A huge surprise, for sure," Killian responded, still feeling the terror Michael's mother had inflicted by merely spreading her presence through the entire room. 'No wonder Michael is so strong. His mother is a monster!'
Fantasy · HideousGrain
She did strangle him lol
"No. I won't give him to you. If you want Danny's Living Soul, you will have to take it from my dead body!" Michael responded, his teary eyes turning menacingly ice-cold, "But I'm not sure if you're ready to kill me or not. I wouldn't be surprised if you could do it."
Fantasy · HideousGrain
Alas the tags do not lie. No Harem. So I suppose it'll probably be one of them or someone you introduce later into the story.
His body tensed up and he turned around, just to see two beauties sitting on his bed- Maria Seraph and Alice Zenovia.
Fantasy · HideousGrain
Nova is a her?
Intelligence: 1-14
Fantasy · KingCrimSoon
Sounds like a load of bull but let's roll with it!
[System suffers great damage, to function, the System separates itself from its creator and enters completely into the host's soul to survive]
Fantasy · KingCrimSoon
The amount of noticeable commas and long drawn out sentences did break me out of immersion a couple of times. It gives the impression of a rough first draft chapter if I had to be honest. Hopefully, when you improve down the line in your writing you can do another edit to this chapter because it certainly would benefit a ton from it.
ch 0 1 Foreword [Edited]
Fantasy · KingCrimSoon
This feels like a run on sentence with how long it is.
Nova, also known in the gaming community as Lord Noah, The Scarlet Assassin, was one of the first players of Legend Genesis, he doesn't know why, but when he saw it, he had a tremendous need to play the game, so he bought its beta version and started playing it day and night, he doesn't even know how much time passed, but he kept playing non-stop, without leaving his room.
Fantasy · KingCrimSoon
Once I stockpile some fast pass, I'll give it a try! Can't really do that for now though. :/
ch 270 Chapter 270- Bumping into the mysterious girl
Eastern · ViciousPepper
two days? Sounds kind of slow lol
-_- What the? Seeing her stupified face, Zhao Tian laughed and stood up stretching his arms "Haah, by the way, I feel like I could cross the first stage of the Transient realm within two days."
I alone am the Honoured One!
Eastern · Akkuzz_69