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To be honest, the last few chapters are very short and about nothing.

The author, the loss of consciousness is due to a concussion, and this is brain damage, so it makes no sense to say that he did not harm them.

The first half of the chapters are a month old and the second is completely new, the story is good, but I think it would be better to release chapters gradually, fueling interest, than all at once.

I can give you some advice, just don't quit and keep writing, that's the most important advice.

There is also an option to wish for a super mind in order to reproduce any superpower yourself, but to be realistic, how much effort and material and mental resources are needed for this, and I also do not remember a single person or character who would say that he is happy to be the smartest.

As for the first two, it's just a banal power that you always have in your hands. The priority of the first and second may vary depending on what will have greater potential after execution. For example, you can get the powers of superman, but you will be at the level of a Homelander, but if you made a wish for telekinesis, you could have the potential of Tatsumaki, or vice versa, if you make a wish for telekinesis, you can move cars at most, and if you make a wish to become strong, you will be strong as a Homelander, or it may be more profitable to make a wish for some more specialized and narrowly focused kinesis, for example magnetism is like that of Magneto and this will increase the potential power of the force. Power is more important than just an entertainment system, but if it's some really pathetic rob or you don't have enough karma, for example, you can just make up an autonomous bunker in which you will have a medical capsule that can treat you and prolong your life, virtual reality like in SAO and AI that will generate any world you want.

By the way, such an "entertainment system" is in third place on my list of Rob's priority desires. Right after Superman's abilities and telekinesis. Because it allows you to be sure that no matter what in the other world there will be normal entertainment familiar to you, and it is also a piece of nostalgia from your native world.

Will the creation of games play a role in this work? Or the story will be centered around anime and manga.

Tell me a fanfiction with a similar system.

Why is the movie coming after the anime? Creating anime is more difficult in my opinion. While you can even just take a movie on your phone.

Author, release chapters when the stones are being updated, it will be more effective in obtaining stones.

Admitting to killing the guards was a stupid decision.

Take my stones, I don't need them anyway, if the chapter comes out when I have stones, they are yours, other works that I have subscribed to seem to be already at a standstill.

The author, how about changing the rewards of the system and instead of giving one big one first (an hour of power work), distribute it into many small ones, also do not give mc such difficult tasks as defeating Noma, or if given, let him not physically confront him by taking out some kind of buff needed for the story only at this moment, and having come up with some kind of plan or lose, it's still not bad either, your story won't get worse if the mc sometimes loses. You gave out a bunch of awards with both percentages and time of work of the force, and now you give useless or stupid and unnecessary awards so that the mc would not become too op. Don't you think that's silly? It's worth focusing more on revealing the character and less on the system and rewards.

The author is well done that only the strong ones made it to the quarterfinals, but I think it was necessary to make sure that bakugo, shoto, Izuku and Yuta got to the semifinals

Many thanks to the author for saying about such a thing as the work of a sharingan in a world without a chakra, although it has not yet been mentioned that for his very work it is necessary to feed the chakra through the chakrocannels into the eyes.

I suddenly thought, why don't a izawa's glasses automatically moisturize his eyes? It seems easy and logical, is it really so difficult to make glasses that will prevent moisture from evaporating from the eye or will moisturize the eyes.

Excuse me, you may not adhere to common sense by simply saying that the mc knocked everyone out, but why specify that he knocked everyone out with a punch in the stomach since it's safe.

I do not know why, but I am very annoyed by illogical moments, those where the author is wrong, the author, aizawa cannot block kurogiri's quirk because he does not see his body...