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the speed will be severely reduced for dragon ball players imo and thats good.

If Garp or Whitebeard had access to Nen, do you think that would then get one-shotted by Vegeta? Or would it be a fair fight? Hell, Whitebeard fought just fine against Golden Buddha Afro-boy, I think he'd be able to take on a great ape too.

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this reminds me of levelling magic in skyrim by casting the same spell constantly while walking around the map.

He always had at least one Will maintain a constant state of meditation to further enhance his connection to the Force, and he had other wills practice skills like Gyō, Clairvoyance, Shatterpoint, and Precognition to grind their proficiency and strengthen the effects of the skills.

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Here too you repeated the name too often. The first rayleigh was enough imo. English is not my first language but reading the names repeated so often feels off. Correct me if i'm wrong though

Rayleigh poured more aura into his sword to raise the number of transformed sword auras circulating the blade, sharpening and strengthening the edge. Rayleigh used Shū, Kō, and Ryū to strengthen his muscles, but upon receiving the impact of T-Bone's sword, he realized it had been overkill since the frighteningly tall man was weaker than Rayleigh's base stats.

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hm, you could reduce the use of name and replace them with "he", "him" and the like. the chapters would flow better. In this paragraph you repeated t-bone like 4 times but 2 was more than enough imo.

T-Bone realized that what Rayleigh used was different from what T-Bone knew, but he could also tell how dangerous it was. If he did not cut those lines, they would cut him in half. Rayleigh could also release them without a flashy, inefficient swing like T-Bone had, so the Captain understood that he was at a disadvantage. T-Bone shouted, "FLYING BIRDS," and made a strong, horizontal slash. His sword intent scattered into a dozen lines that each made a right angle that switched up and down, making each line of light look like a flapping bird.

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i mean, it's hard to beat shooting lightning from your fingers

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Be honest, which is cooler? Sending lightning from your fingertips, or swinging bolts of lighting from your blade?

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man, imagine how tanky he'll be with armament haki on top of this. to not mention the fact that his nen abilities will only keep growing

The hundreds of sword intent fragments struck Rayleigh head-on, causing tiny bursts of light on each collision. Too bad none of them made it through Rayleigh's Ren. As an Enhancer, Rayleigh could easily enhance the defensive aspect of his Ren to the point he was bullet-proof against high powered rifles. These sword intent fragments had less power than a bullet and against his Ren, the quantity did not make up for the lack in quality.

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