ure kinda dumb
Did she know something? Did he somehow expose himself? No that's impossible, he quickly calmed his racing heart.
LGBT+ · Melted_Ore
kinda being a hypocrite here
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LGBT+ · Melted_Ore
orrr is this another couple
"Fang Junjie… My mate."
LGBT+ · DreamTower
Why did I think it was fang bai? Did he get the wrong person?
"Fang Junjie… My mate."
LGBT+ · DreamTower
When you switched the character POVs you used the exact same dialogue and text from the previous POV. So instead of making it a perspective, it seemed like you were jusy rewriting the same text again.
ch 28 Yu Wang- Extra
Fantasy · Rosey_Lilu
(;´༎ຶٹ༎ຶ`)
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LGBT+ · MightyMiruLin
go to your hoe?
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LGBT+ · MightyMiruLin
its alright
ch 0 -1 A/N [Jan 30, 2022]
LGBT+ · ProudFujo
Wonderful. As a suggestion, when switching povs or looking at a scene from a different perspective, try highlight what the character feels instead of copying the dialogue. Perhaps some unsaid words?
ch 28 Yu Wang- Extra
Fantasy · Rosey_Lilu
hypocrite
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LGBT+ · Snowblade_08
julietans? Oooo
ch 47 First Love: Mo Xue (47)
Fantasy · dreamingjuliet
Depending on the situation, this could be considered a foreshadowing on the host merging identities unknowingly hinting at a much greater reasoning behind his transmigration. On the other hand it could just be a pronoun error or inconsistency...
But still... Even the one that I wore to the palace doesn't have this much layer on it.
Fantasy · dreamingjuliet
MANN I LOVR THE FLUFF
ch 0 4 First Love: Mo Xue (4)
Fantasy · dreamingjuliet
yesyes +1 new reader...
ch 0 4 First Love: Mo Xue (4)
Fantasy · dreamingjuliet
ah yes the art of cuten- seduction
Unable to bear it anymore, Wei Xiang pounced on Qinghe with a growl and pulled his head forward to meld their lips together again. Faced with his husband's sudden passion, Qinghe felt very gratified. See? His seduction had worked perfectly!
LGBT+ · crimson_carnation
dhar man
Kong Min solemnly nodded. "So you see? That is why we shouldn't judge you by human standards. You are not a murderer. In fact, you are actually a very good being who has helped far more than he has hurt."
LGBT+ · crimson_carnation
Righttt...
[Seduction skill: -2]
Force to protect the Male Lead [BL]
LGBT+ · phoenixhyperion