mank_007

2d

Commented

no Restoration?

"Professor, there are 8 schools of magic. They are the School of Warding, Summoning, Divination, Enchantment, Invocation, Illusion, Alteration, and finally Necromancy."

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Fantasy · Esenel

mank_007

22d

Commented

missing strengthen

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Only Wisdom Awakened

Fantasy · Almun_

mank_007

22d

Commented

this wasn't a tome tho. just stated he created this skill

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why doesn't he read books about I don't know battle strategy and tactics, combat techniques, mana manipulation techniques, swordmandship, tactics, gates, mage tactics, different monsters found in gates, psychological warfare, psychology and sociology .etc. his literal class is about knowledge. 😒

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Fantasy · Almun_

mank_007

22d

Commented

doesn't want to be noticed and hides mage skills, but proceeds to solo a dungeon? does he not think he's gonna draw a lot of attention, bringing back a mountain of corpses plus a boss by himself? never understood the whole hide powers trope. and let me guess his gonna have a separate identity too. but ok 😒

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Fantasy · Almun_

mank_007

22d

Commented

mantle?

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Fantasy · Almun_

mank_007

22d

Commented

he doesn't have to cast spells under rank 1 remember?

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Fantasy · Almun_

mank_007

23d

Commented

Leonel?

He looked toward the old couple who seemed even more shaken now. Just how much did Ryu know, exactly?

Dimensional Descent

Fantasy · Awespec

mank_007

1mth

Commented

They all began shattering like glass, crumbling into bits of crystalline pieces! Even his hands, legs, and…

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

mank_007

1mth

Replied to DaoistEchPYX

ok? doesn't mean he truly loved her.....because like I said, if he truly loved her, he would love her child too. he's literally the last piece of her that's alive. same thing with Snape in Harry Potter. He hated Harry's father but loved Lily, and even after she died, he cherished her memory and even looked after Harry (in his own way) and protected in the end.

Anger bubbled within him, but it quickly subsided when he remembered that he had already exacted his revenge by allowing the child she had with Lyrius J. Khaleji to be put in harm's way.

I Became a Wizard with a Quest Book!

Fantasy · DurcalAka

mank_007

1mth

Commented

so the body was taken over twice?? once as a baby and again when he's older?

The soul in the body of his nephew wasn't Valerius's; it belonged to someone else, while Valerius's own soul seemed to have vanished. This change should have taken place after the kidnapping. Even he could see that. It meant his brother should also be aware of that.

I Became a Wizard with a Quest Book!

Fantasy · DurcalAka

mank_007

1mth

Commented

so far, I'm digging this. grammar is top-notch. mc isn't overly arrogant, doesn't have anger issues, doesn't bully have a revenge-psychotic murder mentality (hopefully), and stories not all over the place. good pacing and story building. author knows what direction he wants to go, and the story reflects that. great work so far.

ch 0 7 Ch 7: The True Scheme

I Became a Wizard with a Quest Book!

Fantasy · DurcalAka

mank_007

1mth

Commented

then he didn't truly "love" her. he would have done anything in his power to protect the last piece of her.

Anger bubbled within him, but it quickly subsided when he remembered that he had already exacted his revenge by allowing the child she had with Lyrius J. Khaleji to be put in harm's way.