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this doesn't seem like a simple escort mission....

so this marks the end of these zad training chapters, honestly he did a bit more than i thought he could, im surprised he could even use magic

another short chapter i see! i hope you get back to writing some long chapters sometime! these just aren't enough for me!

echinda? that you?

this arthur character seems special somehow, but seeing as to how surprised he was to see ken's power, we can assume that he wont play a big part in the later chapters

somehow i still think ken is holding back! but that may be just because we haven't seen him truly ever use every ounce of his power

there really isnt much to say in this chapter other than ken is stronger than expected, usually thought he seemed strong because he was surrounded by weak villagers!

oh god this cra the crusher aint gonna last long

i wonder what's so scary about that troll that Zad was so scared, also i didn't quite like the way zad kept saying ken's name at the end of the sentence, it makes it seem like he's trying to find a diffrent word for "boss" which is actually funny, overall great chapter and can't wait to see them fight this new enemy.

this young knight is pretty concerning, he might even hold ken back during a battle, unless some big changes come. also thanks for the early chapter!

i liked the little reference to the first chapter. there really isnt much to say on this chapter other than, you're writing has gotten alot better!

maybe?

Zelios!!!!!

this chapter left on a exciting cliff-hanger, im wondering why that kid was barely able to talk out of fear, maybe he saw the king of wolves watching? also, Ken was carrying two swords!?!?

very enjoyable chapter, also liked the tease in the last chapter about ken's lightning magic! cant wait for him to actually use it in combat once his mana capacity grows!

i very much liked the introduction of Zelios in this, truly a fascinating way to show his prowess and his reputation among the common folk, im very exited to see his role in the future!