fck finally they are such a cheating bitches i dont know why people love them poor spidey get cucked by every women and god damn gwen cheated him with fxkn norman osborne and got 2 kids .... God and they as why gwen....
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Anime & Comics · Supes
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ch 30 Chapter 30 - Preliminary Part 5
Anime & Comics · Odyin
this one better for reading imo
ch 18 Resolve
Anime & Comics · Abadom
well if you think everyone wct like retarted when see something new you are deadwrong.... this is how you want him to be not everyone gona like that kinda people like i hate that kinda people and simps but i still read hoping to you get better
ch 26 Chapter 21 - Tang clan and Spirit Harmonization
Anime & Comics · dreammyyy
One piece "World Goverment"....
However, what people could not imagine was the other path for peace, which Shiroken followed. This path involved turning the world into one giant country, rather than having small ones. Sure, there will be conflicts at the start but for how long? Sooner than later, people will start inter-marriage. When there will be children with mixed backgrounds, who will they discriminate against?
Anime & Comics · MisterImmortal
its all started with tiktok slowly burns whole world iq...
ch 60 List of banned words
Anime & Comics · HIKARU_GENJI
OP af i like it :D
ch 56 CH 50: ...TENGOKU NO KOGO
Anime & Comics · HIKARU_GENJI
+1
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Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
he used ice acidflame healing factor 3 kekkai from start aftrt that all the light speels are kekkai genkai he have 10 11 kekkai genkai its too much just use warrior and roqur spec and chakra from naruto for jutsus it will be k too much skills its really too much for naruto world
ch 0 6 Chapter 6
Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
MC is like a robot or i cant feel emotions of characters in this fanfic Like a bunch of robots trying to com. Still not bad if you can fix it it will be good
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Anime & Comics · _Khaled_
its ok then i get it wrong sorry. I wish you good lcuk and get better with time good day
ch 101 Valen Attacks & Updating Vlad on the mission
Anime & Comics · Vostarian
No one is your enemy so chill out you asked at end of chaptet for opinion why your ranking getting lower as a reader i told my opinion maybe im right maybe wrong dont try too hard to defense your wiew just accept different opinions it will do good for you ....
ch 101 Valen Attacks & Updating Vlad on the mission
Anime & Comics · Vostarian
its okay but you focused too much on OC and side stories 120 chap and we are still at start no progress 5 6 chap marine it could've been 2 msx 3 and same goes that valen chap too much focus its killing the focus its not wrong but you coul'vr change POV in the middle to Vlad then some pages then go back to side characters and stroies You made it so that almost 10 11 chap without MC its plain boring thats why your ranking low from other OP fanfics Im not saying your story bad ita quite the opposite quite well detailed but too much focus on side characters without MC it will bore people good story keep going
ch 101 Valen Attacks & Updating Vlad on the mission
Anime & Comics · Vostarian
Its not story is bas but you are wasting too much chap about some nobodies 2 3 chap that we will never see or only see 1 or 2 mwntion. You are focusing on side story and missions on ao much that main story didnt progresses he fer captured and run to his kingdom and thata it this one piece about advwnture and emotions not kingdom building with somw ransom nobodies Focus on MC and progress little bit faster you can docus on more important side characters after you go meet original OP characters not some random OC Belive me nobody wanta too much OC characters on fanfic it will kill the joy that marine arc juat torture same goes for valen too much focus it should at most 2 chap otherwise it will beboring like this Good atory but ypu flex too much
ch 101 Valen Attacks & Updating Vlad on the mission
Anime & Comics · Vostarian
Well get strong fast or shanks can kill u Miles away
ch 0 9 Chapter 8
One Piece: Reincarnated As Madara!
Anime & Comics · Alpha_Ace