keep going author , i liked every bit of the story and it's perfect [img=Loving it][img=update]
While I do generally like criticism and I try to improve my writing based on it, it holds true just in case of constructive criticism. Though I enjoy writing, it is difficult and very demotivating by itself. Spending several hours writing to just have some people take out their frustrations/anger on me doesn't by any means makes it easier for me to keep writing. While I do aspire to make this story as good as I can, I don't claim that I'll satisfy everyone's expectations.
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
I feel like tracking the author's ip and go beat him up for saying that
The second, was the logic part. This part is very similar to coding on Earth. Since I know coding, this part is easier for me. However, it ain't much of an advantage. Coding is pretty easy to learn, I'm sure the brighter kids from my class could pick it up within a week or two.
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
1 yuan for every breath
[Level 1 reward: 1 yuan for every breath; 1 yuan for every second of sleep; 1 yuan for every step. Reward of 24 points per day.]
Urban · Love Douban
T888
Jack nodded in satisfaction after seeing the outer appearance of the Bugatti. He could see that the number plate of the car was Inch. A. 888. Then right above the plate number, there was a name written in capital letters. 'JACK'. This word was a work of art too.
Urban · Alan_Wafula
my favourite.
"Dog system, why did you still not have the guts to talk to me? It's been ten years since you left me here, and you say you will take me to another world, so why didn't you bring me to Konoha? Who doesn't know that in Naruto World, Konoha is the center of this world, and the most important thing is that there are so many Konoha's girls! Although it seems to be okay now, at least, I don't worry about being dismembered!"
Anime & Comics · Iampoorguy
i bet the owner is red robed lady who finds this youngster intresting
Chapter 34 Treasure Pavilion
Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
After making sure that no one was looking at him, Shun Long put the black robe on his body as he headed towards the 'Treasure Pavilion'.
Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
i knew it
Chapter 10 The shameless Lin family
Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
break up the engagement scene
Before Shun Long could find someone to spar, a maidservant of his mother came to inform him that the Lin family has come for a visit and his father has already requested his presence in the main hall.
Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
cap
''Originally I was attacked by some people and was left to die bleeding on the ground when a thunderstorm erupted, a few hours ago about 3 miles away from the Blue Forest. Then just as I was about to die an elderly person that was flying close to me, grabbed me and rescued me from the storm. When he saw the injuries on my body, he gave me some mysterious pill and when I swallowed it my injuries started healing instantly. Then after an incense stick of time had passed my injuries had already healed and not even a scar was left behind. It was truly miraculous. But then the elder abruptly left as soon as he saw that my injuries had healed and I didn't even have the time to ask for his name as he soared in the sky and flew towards the east.''
Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
omg even master LU?? Who is that?
Forget about healing it in the blink of an eye, even if Master Lu concocted his best medicines, it would still require at least 1 and a half months for an injury like that to heal, don't even mention the internal injuries or Rock's broken bones as it would be unknown when and if they could be completely healed by such a medicine.
Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
what's wrong with dat ??
"...Right," Spectacular Mustache Man could not help but slightly squint his eyes as Riley answered him nonchalantly, "Let's move on and discuss your answers. So in the very first question, the test asked you what you would do if you see an old woman struggling to cross the street; and from the 4 given choices, you chose D: Push her off the street…
Urban · Romeru
Anyway, it'd help if you guys convey to the readers/viewers on those sites that this fanfic has been copied without my knowledge if you ever come across it online. For the record, I have only published this book on pat reon, webnovel, ffn, watt pad, royal road and scribble hub. Basically, if you don't see me thanking patrons at the end of the last few chapters on any website (other than pat reon), you can assume that someone else is copying it.]
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex