seriously you turn a world that barely knows schooling into a 21st century playground. They have guns and future tech, then you hint at a Disney World like them park and now we have snipers and night vision goggles
ch 203 Destruction Of The Underground Camp
Fantasy · lumydee
why do they have guns, these people are just teaching people how to use a bow.
He first attended his military lectures on strategies, cannon operations and safety measures, as well as a device called a 'gun'.
Fantasy · lumydee
WHY!!!!!!!!!!!! Why do authors have their character go to a world in midevil era and have them transform the world to be in 21st century
Before constructing houses for the citizens, he had to make sure that these 3 Industries existed: Water & Sewer treatment plant, Thermal power plant (electricity) and central heating plant.
Fantasy · lumydee
So he had no problem with oil refining and the introduction of machines but he had a problem with introducing textiles
Of course for now, he didn't want to go into textile just yet.... He wanted to first use his time to breed the animals properly.
Fantasy · lumydee
If it had been 3 days and those dead soldiers' bodies were left out there animals would have come and ate them because of the smell of blood would attract them
Landon had the men pile up all the body parts and burn them in a huge bonfire.
Fantasy · lumydee
Wait he has the ability to give people new memories now? Why didn't he do that before the war and have them leave?
ch 62 Painting The Fields Red - Part 3
Fantasy · lumydee
Why would you give bulldozers and tractors to people who can barely ride a horse and buggy
ch 54 Driving Classes
Fantasy · lumydee
Why go this rout? Everytime a character goes to a different world and they incorporate their ideas to bring a set of people to a higher era than they are? I get you can upgrade somethings but you went from a medevil era to them having cannons and bypassing small explosives and dynamite to now having people who have no idea what soap is to them processing oil?
ch 43 Oil Production
Fantasy · lumydee
How is Loren the number 1 ranked Summoner? Ian is a much higher character and with his pets that are higher tier class as well he should be the top
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Why would he use Summon Release? If he used that his pets would be returned to the wild, why not use return or recall? And where is the other skills he was using before?
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Story was ok but the MC was not really relatable. There were times when you thought the game would notify him he did something but wasn't there.
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What senior goes to prison?
Since ancient times, there were plenty of seniors who went to prison. However, it could be said with certainty that Xia Fei was the first to go to alien prison.
Sci-fi · 9 lightyears per second
Story is good but it has grammar problems but they aren't super bad
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: The Unexpected Vocation
Fantasy · RadiaX00
Has promise but it feels kinda rushed in parts. But feels like a good story
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Awakening Ceremony
Fantasy · RadiaX00
Story is good but diffenitly need to get an editor
ch 0 4 A Sharp Military Saber
Eastern · Heaven's White Crane
Why would you turn your home into an amusement park
ch 228 An Official Meeting
I'm the King Of Technology
Fantasy · lumydee