What a reference :D
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Anime & Comics · A_Sinner
This emoji got me good hahah
I dived down in the river. Wow, I could breathe underwater 🏊♂️ and I could see everything.
TV · maturenovels
Seems the MC is becoming weaker. Can't even think or act for himself.
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Anime & Comics · Kogatsu
You gotta drop the trust levels in Shuri, that's some bs betrayal against our MC.
ch 19 Fugitive Series pt 1
Anime & Comics · Ashtin_Pratt
So dumb...
ch 32 Hinata Sakaguchi
Anime & Comics · Golden_Slime
Thanks for another quality chapter :)
ch 0 6 Radar
Video Games · GrimsReaper
+1
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Anime & Comics · Daeemon
There better be vicious revenge on Hippolyta....
ch 0 7 History
Anime & Comics · JohnFrost
Maybe main problem is the speed at which the conflict happened? There was no lead up, it was instantly, "go destroy city MUAHAHAHA" with little motivation. It seemed a little impulsive and out of character. I do not really mind evil MCs and what not, crushing the good guys, buuuuut the reasoning seemed a bit shallow. But yeah im kinda dumb as well, I like your concept and the power leveling, so I hope if you do fix it right up, and you continue going strong.
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Anime & Comics · BlackSwordman1234
World travel done right imo :)
ch 13 Chapter 13
Movies · Gibby_Gibson
I really like the force unleashed games and star wars in general, so super excited too see how this plays out, good luck!
ch 0 2 2 The force user and the Durslays
Book&Literature · ferferfer2
If he can recover his legs you got a shot at a decent story, otherwise idk kinda lame being in a wheelchair the whole time. But don't let me curb your passion, keep going with your writing! :)
ch 0 7 Chapter 7: Visiting Carne
Anime & Comics · Panda_sword_Master
Channel you inner Tyrion for us please :)
ch 0 9 Update (Not A Chapter)!
TV · Kenny_Landers
kinda bs ngl, that stuff with the gods kinda meh
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Movies · Uchiha_Lover21
I like it, you're building up the suspense between the meeting between lucifer and micheal nicely, im looking forward to it. Although it does feel like Micheal is quick to rage is many situations. Understandable for now since he has lost a lot, and is suffering in his own right, but I hope to see some character development there, learn to accept loss and gain some wisdom in the process. Also, are you going to explore religious ideas and themes later on? Like the commandments and sins are interesting concepts, also things like blind religious devotion vs skepticism and doubt. But yeah good job! Have a stone :)
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TV · Samael_Son_of_Dawn
damn, well this is a drop
ch 25 Chapter 25
Anime & Comics · Ridoux_Studio
Your dialogue is super confusing, I don't know who is talking first or second or replying. Hope you can fix that! Goodluck
ch 33 Chapter 33: Ace
One Piece: Guardian Angel
Anime & Comics · Smol_frog