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What a reference :D

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This emoji got me good hahah

I dived down in the river. Wow, I could breathe underwater 🏊‍♂️ and I could see everything.

The Fastest Man in Game of Thrones AU

The Fastest Man in Game of Thrones AU

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Seems the MC is becoming weaker. Can't even think or act for himself.

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+1

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Maybe main problem is the speed at which the conflict happened? There was no lead up, it was instantly, "go destroy city MUAHAHAHA" with little motivation. It seemed a little impulsive and out of character. I do not really mind evil MCs and what not, crushing the good guys, buuuuut the reasoning seemed a bit shallow. But yeah im kinda dumb as well, I like your concept and the power leveling, so I hope if you do fix it right up, and you continue going strong.

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kinda bs ngl, that stuff with the gods kinda meh

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I like it, you're building up the suspense between the meeting between lucifer and micheal nicely, im looking forward to it. Although it does feel like Micheal is quick to rage is many situations. Understandable for now since he has lost a lot, and is suffering in his own right, but I hope to see some character development there, learn to accept loss and gain some wisdom in the process. Also, are you going to explore religious ideas and themes later on? Like the commandments and sins are interesting concepts, also things like blind religious devotion vs skepticism and doubt. But yeah good job! Have a stone :)

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