CosmicSkyNet

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Thank you for this chapter 🙏I wish for you and your wifes wellness

ch 50 50. Two Halves of The Same Lock

Fate/Juggernaut

Anime & Comics · greenbaypitbull

CosmicSkyNet

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He drew his bowstring and reached his strongest anchor point as he loaded all his strength into the bow.

Supreme Archer: Taking The Game's Weakest Class To The Top

Games · HomieLv1

CosmicSkyNet

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I would say keep writing and use this fic as a way to get better and experiment a little bit as well 👍 Thank you for taking the feedback well

ch 0 2 Entry log 2: Christophsis

ARC-77 (Fordo)

Others · Scott47

CosmicSkyNet

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I’m assuming Jake will grow taller since he’s 16yrs old and in his growing phase

Jake looked over and saw his 3 droids all lined up on the wall under the window, R4 in his normal stance, Rusty folded up his eyes not emitting light, and Clank who was in a seated position with his legs splayed out in front of him. Jake realized how big Clank truly was, even sitting down Clank upper body easily covered over half of the window, which sat a on the wall around jakes chest level, Jake being 5.8 feet tall. The B2s width was also apparent as it's wide shoulders took up much of the entire wall itself.

Star Wars - Rise of the Rust

Movies · The_B1BattleDroid

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"Allow me to speak to you in a language I know you understand" Jake activated his shock stick again and held it to his side.

Star Wars - Rise of the Rust

Movies · The_B1BattleDroid

CosmicSkyNet

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Ok, the chapter is ok but could have been better, my thing here is that the the entire feels kinda robotic and there isn’t any life/ personality, the mc is just following his ‘program’ there is no questions about anything, he hasn’t gave his thoughts about being in another universe, fighting in a war where he can potentially die in it, he just simply acts that he is another clone, not a man who died and reincarnated into a clone but just another clone. The writing is also another thing everything is undescriptive (imo) it doesn’t write about what he does on his time on the cruiser or gave a description of what the mc see, feel, hear, or smell it’s just he gets on cruiser goes to admiral ask how long to planet “4hours” ok and then he waits…see what I’m trying to get at? There is not description or text to put it short. Thank you

ch 0 2 Entry log 2: Christophsis

ARC-77 (Fordo)

Others · Scott47

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Nice! found it

Phase 1 Armor [Image]

ARC-77 (Fordo)

Others · Scott47

CosmicSkyNet

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Nice chapter, a bit short could have made it a bit longer. The mc really wasn’t suprised and shocked about himself being reincarnated as an Arc trooper, he just took it like it was another Monday to which bothered me a bit b/c I hoped he would be in a dilemma about the whole thing but other than that good first chapter 👍. Is the MC in with a Jedi and what does his armor look if you could give a description or picture. Thank you 🙏

ch 0 1 Entry Log 1: The Padawan