Guillaume_Crst

1yr

Posted

The background and the concept of this Harry Potter's fan fic is incredible. The development is good and this connect well with all the story. Some small syntax errors. You give me envy to read the next chapter. Don't give up this project pls.

Harry Potter: The God of Magic (BEING REWRITTEN)

Book&Literature · LazyCaveman

Guillaume_Crst

2yr

Commented

This news is really good, some clarifications are necessary but otherwise the content is there. I think too much info could have lengthened and killed the plot so I was fine with it. We thus keep a dark side of the character who we remember is a kind of black lord. As a fan it is the quality of the novel and the regularity of the writing that is appreciated. Ouvrir dans Google Traduction • Commentaires

ch 81 Thinking about rewriting