i’m just gonna say that I am not a fan of the witcher...and yet u have me captured in your story, i don’t particularly have any reason to come back to this story....and yet here I am. U have made a story that attracts someone who isn’t interested in the witcher fall in love with ur story. Love ur story keep it up ‘Tis a real good story’
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Video Games · RevenantSnake
Nice! Love that you’re making Fringilla appear «Human like» her decision, I would have done the same
"Yes, your majesty. He has poisoned me and only he knows the antidote. Every three days, he gives me a potion to stave off the effects. I tried talking with my contacts in order to try and cure myself, but it was to no avail. The boy is an incredibly talented alchemist. His work is some of the most brilliant I've seen. I am at his mercy until I can try and free myself." I said truthfully. I liked Harkon, but not enough to try and lie to the emperor.
Video Games · RevenantSnake
I like this story a lot. i’ve been writing some fanfics myself and i can tell that u are putting in effort and love to your story...just dont burn yourself out, i’d hate to see a brilliant story like this go to waste
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Video Games · RevenantSnake
I like what ur doin here and I think u can make a good story that differs from the original plot. I think most people will like this story as long as u have schools involved as well as national tournaments I myself tried writing a jhujutsu kaisen fanfic but it's just too much to think about. I'm rooting for you and hope you'll take this story far [img=recommend]
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Anime & Comics · VH5O
Although I loved the story for its early chapters because of the realism, I don't hate what you've done with bringing supernatural powers into it. It started to get repetative and a little boring with the piracy and selling the merchandise, but you introduced this arc nicely timed Keep up the good work Nick
ch 169 The Lone Dragon's Judgement
War · Nick_Alderson
I’m sorry you didn’t like the chapter...AHMED😂😂😂😂
ch 11 Start!
Anime & Comics · Thepoet
I don’t know how to pace my story, but once we get to their hatsus, you’ll be grinning
ch 10 Dear diary
Anime & Comics · Thepoet
No. He will have the same power level as one would have in HxH. No one pice. No demon slayer. No naruto. Only HxH power scaling
ch 0 3 Discovering...
Anime & Comics · Thepoet
I can promise you That it Won’t be anything like a shitty system, I’m so tired of systems in novels
ch 0 5 next destination
Anime & Comics · Thepoet
Really like what you’re doing here, love the pacing as well as the main Character! Hope you continue this story long enough for you to cover some of the dark continent and the succession war arc, but this is your story so keep doing you!