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rich super strong guy that steals random peoples cars it seems.
Xiao Chen smiled, threw his suitcase into the trunk, and then drove away.
My Son-in-law Is A War God
Urban 路 Loves Raw Vegetables
he'll be even cheaper...馃槒 his dialogue gives him away
"Next time, it won't be this cheap! Get lost!"
My Son-in-law Is A War God
Urban 路 Loves Raw Vegetables
馃槀馃ぃ馃ぎ
Xiao Chen's eyes showed deep contempt, "Is it my strength you see? My wealth? Or is it my power?"
My Son-in-law Is A War God
Urban 路 Loves Raw Vegetables
exactly, totally unrealistic plot point. what ARE you doing here?!
And yet today, you come looking for me?"
My Son-in-law Is A War God
Urban 路 Loves Raw Vegetables
no queen would chase a man and beg she is in reality a bit desperate
Ye Menghua, the heiress of the Capital City's Ye Family, always held herself above others like a queen.
My Son-in-law Is A War God
Urban 路 Loves Raw Vegetables
the elder or the young man ? and are they talking potty trained? 馃き
One could tell right away that he was well-trained.
My Son-in-law Is A War God
Urban 路 Loves Raw Vegetables
when will we get to something besides movie script scene descriptions? where's the story?
Inside the stone house, there is a green stone bed about a zhang long. In the corner, there is a blue array, and on the array, there are five indentations of equal size, each containing a grey-white Spirit Stone. It looks like the Spiritual Energy within the Spirit Stones is about to be exhausted.
Immortal Venerable of the Beast Race
Eastern 路 Divine Sovereign of Great Expansion
another description for a film director to set up the scene, but this is a novel author not a script.馃槵
In the southwest part of the Qianzhu Mountain Range, there is a valley surrounded by mountains on three sides. Outside the valley, there is a blue stone tablet more than ten zhang high, inscribed with three golden characters, "Qianzhu Valley."
Immortal Venerable of the Beast Race
Eastern 路 Divine Sovereign of Great Expansion
why would your 1st paragraph everyone reads of your story begin like this?? it's sounds like a scene description written to a film director.
The Qianzhu Mountain Range is located at the border between Qingzhou and Jingzhou, stretching tens of thousands of miles. A large number of Green Cloud Bamboo grows here, hence the name.
Immortal Venerable of the Beast Race
Eastern 路 Divine Sovereign of Great Expansion
why change the names now? just go back to chapter one and change them all for consistency
"Sanitation, it must be changed," Li Si Te (Liszt) said as he turned to speak to Ma Ku Si (Marcus).
The Mighty Dragons Are Dead
Fantasy 路 Bai Yuhan
does he know how to make nuclear weapons!? 馃槼 I'm sure you don't because I don't despite being from his world.
Because in this world, transmigrators didn't have much of an advantage鈥攎agic and Dou Qi surpassed technology鈥攈e couldn't simply make nuclear weapons and spread destruction, so the idea of competing with magic and Dou Qi using technology had to be put aside.
The Mighty Dragons Are Dead
Fantasy 路 Bai Yuhan
this story.
"What sort of human suffering is this?"
Immortality Cultivation: I Can increase My Stats Using Clansmen's Qi-Blood
Eastern 路 Centenary Cattle
20 years a famous beauty, and still her fiance never kissed her ?! Clearly, he liked men, and her love was unrequited. 馃き This explains a lot about her mindset and why she embraces a vampire kissing her with his piercingly cold breath.
This man, whom she had just met, had taken away her first kiss that she had been saving for over twenty years.
The Indifferent Young Master鈥檚 Flash Marriage
Urban 路 Mu Jiujiu
nope, he's a vampire since he too pretty to be a zombie. that's why his breath is cold. all humans have warm breath, around 37'C or 98.6'F, sooooo if his breath is cold, he's the undead.馃槒
The man's lips were cold and his piercingly cold breath slowly invaded Su Wan's lips.
The Indifferent Young Master鈥檚 Flash Marriage
Urban 路 Mu Jiujiu
she better watch out. They say psychopaths have nice soothing voices, thats how they trap and manipulate you...馃ザ
Su Wan was a person who liked a man for his voice.聽She recalled the reason she was attracted to Gu Zihang.聽Besides being her childhood sweetheart, it was because he had the voice of a broadcaster.
The Indifferent Young Master鈥檚 Flash Marriage
Urban 路 Mu Jiujiu
why did he throw away his windbreaker? that was so weirdly random
The stranger spoke in a low yet cold voice.聽His voice was soft, but it was so pleasant that it could take one's breath away.聽It was like the first flower blooming in the cold night, with a silent enchantment.
The Indifferent Young Master鈥檚 Flash Marriage
Urban 路 Mu Jiujiu
right, because rich guys never commit crimes...馃檮 definitely too stupid to live
Judging from his overall demeanor and expensive clothing, how could he be a local ruffian who hurt girls in the middle of the night?
The Indifferent Young Master鈥檚 Flash Marriage
Urban 路 Mu Jiujiu
馃檮 too stupid to live. she'd stand gazing into a perfectly handsome face and waiting for a kiss while bullets rain around her and the house is on fire.
However, no man could compare to this man who was grabbing her hand, not even her fianc茅 whom she had been in love with for over twenty years.聽All of them lost to him in terms of appearance and aura.
The Indifferent Young Master鈥檚 Flash Marriage
Urban 路 Mu Jiujiu
A mega rich, super strong guy, under 30, shaming and rejecting the rich beauty queen that begs him ,again, to have her. Then he beats up her body guard in one punch so fast no one sees it. Uhhuh, total fantasy, it's fun to be all powerful. but If he's super strong, rich and already at the top now, why read about him? its totally unrelatable. oh, and in most of the dialogue, look at it and tell me, does anyone really talk like that in real life? . it's ok for a bit of it to weird, but when it's most of it is, it's tiresome to read.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 The Wealthy War God_1
My Son-in-law Is A War God
Urban 路 Loves Raw Vegetables