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i read 240 chapters so far even if it show C75. The world building and power system is good and it is well written. The story isn't progressing at all because the author keep pressing with a sh*t ton of useless "character developpement". MC whine non stop while he is suppose to be 40+, i could relate if i was ten. For whatever reason, author believe that MC go throught a massive pain in his life so he contain a deep darkness within him. If it play no part in the story then idc but it does so this "darkness" or "abyss" is a joke because what MC go throught is common where i'm from and they aren't edgelord everywhere. Solus shouldn't have been part of the story, first he litterally found a overpower artefact after a random stroll in the forest, i sure don't expect to find a million while i stroll. Second, her main purpose is to push forward MC "character developpement" so it is obviously clumsy. Last, author write a "character developpement" for 5 chapter then 10 chapter later everything that it wrote for 5 chapter is put in the trash because NEW "character developpement " yay, ngl if the author do stun like this it's no wonder he manage to write so many chapter.

So far i'm at CH99. The author's writing improves as the novel progresses, which is really nice. At first, MC's blood was boiling so much that you wondered if he was the cause of global warming, then it calmed down as the author found new ways to express himself. The plot is good, there are a few twists that make you want to read more, a nice feeling I admit. The world building is well done, I recommend other authors to read it if they plan to write something similar. Still, the pacing, in my eyes, should be reviewed. First, there are too many chapters about the MC and other characters' thoughts. I don't want to read the character's thoughts every 3 chapters. It can even happen in midst of action. Second, the repetition, there is one chapter where the first half is the second half, the wording was slightly different. There is a shit ton of repetition instead of having to read that we could have input on MC plan or goal. I have no idea what the MC's plan is because every time something happens the MC says some bs like "as expected" or "so it begin". I don't mind not knowing the whole MC plan, but we don't even know the end goal. Also, the MC is supposed to learn from his mistakes, but he keeps screwing up his plan because some twist happens and says some other bs like "omg it's different from the plot". MC end goal is to be happy but how exactly does he plan to achieve it ?Strengh is the best answer to protect his happiness why does it take so few actions to improve himself? His friendship with other characters is a bit bland. In my eyes, it's like "hey, let's be friends" + time skip and voila, we have a friendship. If there is romance, will it be the same? "Let's date" + time skip of 10 years and then they get married and have a kid. The building of the friendship shouldn't have been skipped, because now we don't see the depth of their relationship. Also, a couple of chapters about the character's thoughts appear because the building was skipped and the building is done through thought, it's clumsy. I don't know if I'll continue reading it because of the pacing. I recommend to read at least the first volume. Also for the author, any prologue in my eyes is useless and full of spoilers.

Way better work than some crap you can find in the ranking. The story is slow and has a focus on comedy so sometime it break the flow of story but its still fine. The only downside is the slow update