Victory_salute

2yr

Posted

5 star story except.. This book truly was outstanding, exhilarating, except the author squashed an entire new book into 4 chapters. What I mean by this is that the last 3-4 chapters of this book were hurried. This story could have been spanned across two novels and I feel robbed of an excellent read. I definitely would have spent the time and money to read any follow up story to this as it was great. Honestly my first truly loved story since beginning on these different novel apps.

The Dragon's Coveted Wife

Fantasy · Lauren Rutherford

Victory_salute

2yr

Commented

This book was really amazing however the ending was so rushed. You definitely could have taken this story line on much further. I would say at least another book or two. (I have yet to check whether there are more, but even with there being more the last 3-4 chapters alone could have had their own book.)

ch 50 Chapter 50: The New King

The Dragon's Coveted Wife

Fantasy · Lauren Rutherford

Victory_salute

2yr

Posted

Needs a lit of work. Maybe it got lost in translation, as it reads like a Google translated document. There is a good storyline here, but it gets completely lost in translation.

Mine - Her Hazel Eyes Under My Possession

Urban · Breezy_Boo_

Victory_salute

2yr

Commented

Who is Lotte, I mean this is getting crazy. I am trying desperately to get past the grammatical errors as I have come to believe maybe English is not this individuals first language. Now we are getting names wrong though!!!!

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My Alpha's Mate

Fantasy · Alphamini

Victory_salute

2yr

Replied to Victory_salute

so many grammatical errors*, I do apologize as I'm not sure how to go back and edit my comments.

ch 0 2 The Allure of the Night

My Alpha's Mate

Fantasy · Alphamini

Victory_salute

2yr

Commented

I really feel as though I could fall in love with this story line if there were not soany grammatical errors. Fortunately I am the type of person who reads things the way they should be written rather how they are written. I highly recommend after writing your chapters that you go back through and reread them. This should allow you to pick up on your mistakes and give you the opportunity to become a much stronger writer.

ch 0 2 The Allure of the Night

My Alpha's Mate

Fantasy · Alphamini

Victory_salute

2yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 219 Help Of A Huntress: Part Two

HUNTED

Fantasy · Kelly_Starrz

Victory_salute

2yr

Commented

This alone makes me love this book a thousand times More!!!

[Authors Note: Music Recommendation: Hard For Me by Michele Morrone (if you want!) I will leave an AN when to play it from ;) ]

HUNTED

Fantasy · Kelly_Starrz

Victory_salute

2yr

Commented

you definitely need someone who can draw your wolves because they would be breath taking

"That we need to play in the snow more." He joked. "We need to learn more about this Ice form of yours." He was right of course, we would need to explore it more.