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chapter 32***

I will be completely honest in this review, I read till chapter 20 and I am dissapointed about alot of things. This definitely has spoilers. 1. MC is very cringe and keeps doing stuff to grab attention and shouts the names of his techniques(wtf) 2. Grammar is understandable but alot of mistakes here and there, could be fixed by using grammarly which is free and takes little time to apply. 3. Author titles his chapter starting with the word Nobody, MC is the son of a duke, loved by his very strong family second only to the royal family. Everyone knows the MC and they keep licking him, how is he a nobody? 4. development of the organisation under the MC , in one week he was able to take over half od the empire's businesses and apply 10s of new invensions very easily, gain a shit ton of money. they didn't suffer attacks, people got to know about the products in a very short period of time. MC fired treacherous employees and got loyal ones in a matter of 1-2 days without issues. This seems to be extremely unrealistic. 5. Author keeps replying with 'savage' insults to anyone who critiques him, even if it is a valid criticism. 6. IDK how but there is a shit ton of 5* reviews, people don't seem to understand what a 5* novel is. This one is 3/5 Max.

ok brutally honest review here, Spoilers. let's talk about the story, overall it's a good concept when it comes to the worls itself. that's about the only good point. MC personality changes like 180° after awakening, he kills his classmate for no reason, risking exposure without any benefits. he turns from loving his brother and family to being constantly annoyed with them. i am about 70 chapters in, MC is still in rank 1. keeps saying i will kill students for resources which doesn't make sense. will they be carrying them around without using them firsthand? MC is impulsive, annoying and even his only friend he keeps on using him and treating him like shit.

*SPOILERS * Advantages:- the writing and grammar are great with little to no mistakes. the world building is Good with the back ground being a stable one (not too dark or edgy) DISADVANTAGES (SPOILERS) here are the glaring flaws: the story is average at best, MC has little to no influence on the story. MC tricks Hermione into a relationship in first year (11yo transmigrator wtf) and already hinted about his knowledge of future events at first year again to an 11 ysar old ?! MC has a system yet he feels abit week and his iq is very low, chats with Dumbledore who turned out to be the manipulative version (dark lord not confirmed) yet he conversed with him. no occlumency for protection. (leglimensy wasn't mentioned in the story till this point) I didnt read all the way through simply becomes it's like reading the main book again just with an extra useless character and system with no use. Not a rant, just facts.

let's start with the pros good world building. MC is relatively op but not too muchto ruin the story. system is a plus if you like them. Origin of MC power is revealed early on. CONS MC's personality is bad, i know he is new to the world and shit but he should be more careful and wary, he uses his speed force always which was the reason he was discovered in the first place. he is too trusting and naive and his usage of his powers is wasteful af.

I have read till chapter 578 Spoilers below Let's tall first about the world setting, it is very complicated, the powers are too messy. it has so much potential yet was ruined due to the author making info dumps every 10 chapters. The MC has a tragic background and it turns out the ones who killed his parents are a puppet organization. after 580 chapters the MC still hasn't gone to deal with the one branch of the puppet organisation. He also keeps getting power ups but the people around him keep getting way too powerful way too fast that isn't even giving him a breather nor even the readers to take a break and enjoy the story. 600 chapters and still didn't go the universities even though they offer him full protection wtf. tbh with all those power ups i don't even see a point in him going to uni. this isn't a rant just an honest review, i enjoyed the story but it was too complicated and jumbled up with all the power ups to properly savor it. If you made it till this point then congrats ;)

* I read till chapter 210* ok first of all the grammar is it bad? Yes Is it readable? yeah but try to ignore the mistakes and it is understandable by common sense and logic. However, this isn't the main reason for my low rating *spoilers alert* MC is Ok at the start but becomes shittier as you go on, he was a cool headed guy but suddenly confesses to the princess? Hides his strength but bro you aren't even that strong only compared to the students at your age like 8-11 year olds ffs. MC enters hidden realm with his friends, all of them were useless, and also all of them get power ups and become OP, even the princess with the shitty personality becomes almost on his level of power while he has his cheat which is either useless or he doesn't make the most of it cause he is 'lazy'. This isn't a rant, i had high hopes in the beginning this is why I am so disappointed. My suggestion for the author is to please rewrite the novel abit, the world building is ok just adjust the system level to become a bit better also use grammarly, it's free and will fix like 90% of the grammar mistakes

i don't whether these are fake reviews or not but No. this is definitely not a 5 star book. there are alot of mistakes in grammar. the first few chapters made me not want to read it anymore; spoiler alert I mean seriously?! the MC gets kidnapped by a mafia leader then adopts him as his father? Goes on ONE date then tells the girl I love you? shows off like a noob to her father that he is a mage alchemist etc.. i mean why? you could hid some, just being a mge is enough why show off lol this is clearly a bad novel.

characters are written very poorly, MC is a literal idiot trusting everyone and showing off his secrets, keeps telling everyone about how he could make pills become of higher quality like wtf, also world development is shit, too predictable very bad overall

okay so i have finished reading the whole novel and i have to say i was dissapointed, to say the least. lets start with the good points first since they are few. 1) idea- great idea for a novel which is seen in the first few chapters. you will get drawn in once you start reading. 2) potential- there was so so much potential in this novel, sadly it wasnt used at all. now here comes the bad points. 1) Plot Holes: Fucking plot holes are so numerous, Major ones not less than 30 (ATLEAST), these are the plot holes that impacted the story while minor ones i couldt even be bothered to count. here are a few of them (spoiler) 1) what happened to hongjun who was introduced? 2) what happened to the guy who hacked your chip and the whole "hall of gods" thing? shouldnt this be like a major arc? 3) evil plot against your family which the author elaborated on in the begining chapters? 4) the feng guy who wanted to recruit you and the other two members of the clan who went instead? 5) wtf happened to the association you created? 6) the greek sisters? 7) the fatty who you recruited? 8) wtf was that ending? you took 500+ chapters to go 3-4 realms and when you should be slowing down you jump another 3 in 20 chapters WTF these are just the major ones i could be bothered to write about, WHAT pissed me off so much to write a review was that there was so much potential in this novel and so many major arcs that the author didnt finish that it could have easily rivalled top novels and this could have been atleast 1200+ novel.... overall i dont recommend reading because in the begining it was so good but you will definitely be so fucking dissapointed in the end.