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Change "healthier" to "wealthier"
Margaret was sitting in her living room, drinking a glass of wine, while watching a video on home theater's massive screen. It was obvious by the quality of the room that she was quite wealthy, perhaps even healthier than Alex and his family.
Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist
Urban · Zentmeister
Obvious mistake at the end of paragraph
"I'm afraid you are right... We might have to admit defeat on this one... After all, Mr. Smith did not intentionally step on our toes, perhaps it would be best to open negotiations..." \
Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist
Urban · Zentmeister
What does "à" mean? Is it a mistake?
<[Law Comprehension] Space Law: 1% à 5%>
The Witch Hunter System
Fantasy · Pointbreak
Wasn't the skill name "Time Distortion"
[Skill: Time Reduction – Tier II]
Dead Man Walking: Living By Day, Dead By Night
Urban · Zentmeister
"fee" should be "feel"
Olivia and Elena woke up the next day to find that Zane had once more prepared breakfast for them. Not specifically out of the goodness of his heart, like they misunderstood, but simply because now that he no longer required sleep to survive, or fee refreshed, Zane had a lot of downtime. And he would rather get breakfast out of the way, then waste any time having the girls prepare it.
Dead Man Walking: Living By Day, Dead By Night
Urban · Zentmeister
"Olivi" should be "Olivia"
Zane immediately reached for these bottles, shocking both Elen and Olivia when he opened one up and began to drink it on the spot. Olivi, formerly being Zane's homeroom teacher, felt the need to scold him for drinking alcohol while still being under age. Forgetting that such rules no longer applied to any of them.
Dead Man Walking: Living By Day, Dead By Night
Urban · Zentmeister
"when she saw this." should be "when he saw this."
Zane's hands trembled when she saw this. Luckily for him, he had already stashed his knife away or he would have accidentally dropped it on the spot. His voice cracked slightly, almost as if he was having a hard time speaking the words that needed to be said.
Dead Man Walking: Living By Day, Dead By Night
Urban · Zentmeister
"Siad" should be "Said"
Siad Chae-Yeong as she breastfed her infant daughter alongside the other mature beauties who had given birth to Alex's children. Su-Jin immediately commented on this, assuring her mother that their lover would be perfectly okay.
Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist
Urban · Zentmeister
"expected her two" should be "expected her too"
Unfortunately for her, Alex's skill with cunnilingus was maxed out, and when combined with his many skills that enhanced his sexual abilities, the woman came quicker than either of them had expected her two.
Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist
Urban · Zentmeister
Suspended for 2 days or weeks?
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Toymancer's Cursed Toy Leigon
Fantasy · IGotStones
I believe "Surrounding" should be "Surrendering"
"Either you lay down your arms and join the ranks of the Zetas, surrounding your surviving territory and assets. Or we will hunt you to the ends of the earth."
Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist
Urban · Zentmeister
"Senor" should be "Senior"
"Master, I think that's Senor Song…" Fei Yuyan whispered to Elder Shan, who immediately turned to look at her with wide eyes.
Cultivation Online
Games · MyLittleBrother
Wasn't the sect elder or examiner for the second test a woman?
'Which numbskull gave a fifth level Spirit Warrior the examination token? Whoever it was, he needs a damn beating! And I will be the first to volunteer for that!' The Sect Elder cursed inwardly as he counted the points Yuan had obtained.
Cultivation Online
Games · MyLittleBrother
Change "her" to "him"
But as Rhys was about to step in the truck on the way home, Ayesha suddenly grabbed her from behind; once again not caring that the other soldiers were looking at them.
Rise of the Eromancer
Urban · Romeru
"differe" -> "different"
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Dead Man Walking: Living By Day, Dead By Night
Urban · Zentmeister
Wrong name. Change "Olivia" with "Oliver" or "Mr. Watson"
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Dead Man Walking: Living By Day, Dead By Night
Urban · Zentmeister
"guys" -> "guts"
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Dead Man Walking: Living By Day, Dead By Night
Urban · Zentmeister
I think the word "fly" used is a different word, but I'm not going to type it as I don't want to be in trouble. (four letter words, including all letters already in it)
"If I find out you're in contact with that bastard I will fly you both alive, and feed your hearts to the fucking eagles. Do you understand me, princess?"
Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist
Urban · Zentmeister
"Tanks" should be "Thanks"
Alex sighed heavily and shook his head. It was not as if he really had a choice in this matter. Tanks to the Richard and his attempt on Alex's life and that of his family. Alex had to rely on the Los Zetas to end his blood on his behalf, and in doing so, incurred a great debt to the criminal syndicate. He, of course, explained this, before saying something that Amahle found to be peculiar.
Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist
Urban · Zentmeister
Change "eat" to "east"
After all, he was technically on break, at least for a short time. Though he wasn't being given a full interlude this time around, due to the fact that he had accidentally started the middle eat arc prematurely, Alex needed a break, and what better way to spend it, then with a harem of milfs?
Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist
Urban · Zentmeister