I actually like your writing alot the only critique I have is to to slow the pace I see this pattern in writers I like when they are getting frustrated and soon discontinued the book which I think would be tragic since you are good stort tellers
ch 29 Chapter 28
Others · manny0101
strange chapter transition
ch 85 Start Training Part 2
Anime & Comics · Master_Livythan
Loki yandera?
ch 77 Chapter 16 (18+)
Anime & Comics · MeatBunKun
what happened to the butler who was stronger than most gods?
ch 62 Chapter 2(V2)
Anime & Comics · MeatBunKun
is there a release schedule for this to know when to check back
ch 78 Chapter 78 Trapped Urashiki Otsutsuki
Anime & Comics · UlTiMaTeNiNjA
love this book but still says on hold only notice new chapter because of notification
ch 78 Chapter 78 Trapped Urashiki Otsutsuki
Anime & Comics · UlTiMaTeNiNjA
fallout nv noone ever gives that place love and he can get orochimaru to make necro deathclaws casidores plasma weapons o and one thing most dont remember the clinic next to nv has Phoenix rejuvenation nanotechnology and dermal armor
ch 41 Chapter 41 The Future Daimyo of Kuoh
Anime & Comics · MeatBunKun
just a fyi the title still has (on hold) glad you're back
ch 76 Chapter 76 Arrival of Sasuke and Boruto
Anime & Comics · UlTiMaTeNiNjA
Lala inventions always mess up
ch 20 Chapter 20 Singularity
Anime & Comics · MeatBunKun
reported frostnight for personal attack
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Anime & Comics · GhostyZ
wish I knew who that was a troll maybe?
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Anime & Comics · GhostyZ
is this on hold?
ch 28 Chapter 26: Bruh
Anime & Comics · TheSimp
I am enviable . . . I am Iron Man!
ch 11 10 – A Special Order
Anime & Comics · FapEmperor
I dont know if this novel is dropped but I really hope you keep making more from this I like it alot
ch 75 Chapter 75 Arrival of ?????
Anime & Comics · UlTiMaTeNiNjA
is this novel on hiatus?
ch 75 Chapter 75 Arrival of ?????
Anime & Comics · UlTiMaTeNiNjA
Mass old cranky grandma jutsu ..... run for your lives @!!!!
ch 43 Chapter 43 Warning for Akatsuki
Anime & Comics · UlTiMaTeNiNjA
Bahahaha 🤣
ch 42 Chapter 42 Old Lady special
Anime & Comics · UlTiMaTeNiNjA
take your time I do feel you forgot this is supposed to be tutorial to marvel though