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1yr

Posted

story is good, I won't comment whatsoever on its content, but why put a spoiler in the sypnosis? It's a retarded move. Just plain stupid. Just don't do it next time

Reincarnated As The Strongest Ancestor With a System

Eastern · Dark_Crow1111

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2yr

Commented

wait, did Eli revived? isn't he dead?

ch 32 Chapter 32(The truth part 1)

Reborn to become a heavenly serpent.

Fantasy · Evertruth727_

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3yr

Commented

Damn! The MC hates cliffhangers, he burned the goblin and that is what i am planning to do for those authors who always use cliffhangers. joke aside, thank you for the mass release

ch 31 31 - Sadist

Lucifer's Descendant System

Fantasy · Zhanye

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3yr

Commented

When the mc is a chinese who was know to eat all kind of animal is disgusted to eat creature to become strong. Note: No racism intended, just saying the popular opinion on them

ch 0 2 Increase in Food and Evolution Points

Python Rebirth on Survival Island

Urban · Gaze Through the Winter Water

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3yr

Replied to TheOnlyKing

It is lawful evil...

This is what you called degression of plot, forcing a certain situation and decision just to make it more interesting, which usually have an opposite effect. This will give the reader a bad experience at reading and usually drops it after a couple more chapter. You actually have an amazing start, like it was interesting, thinking this is probably a gold, but wait, its just a fools gold.

ch 0 3 Choice of reincarnation

White Snake

Fantasy · Prazal

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3yr

Commented

No emotional breakdown? no depression? he just think it as a dream after 100 or so? His mentality is not from someone who submitted to reality before but a mentality of your average xianxia protagonist.

ch 0 2 Scorpion avoiding step

I became the strongest as the devils plaything

Eastern · Pinky_chan

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3yr

Posted

This is my first review and I don't have much experience but i hope it helps. so lets get started. MC's personality: I say its pretty good, i don't have much to say 'cause its only 10 chapters or so but you can expect a typical decisive MC troupe. MC's Golden Finger: I specially like his cheat/system. It does'nt make him too overpowered nor there is a system fairy to. The system seems like fair to me. World Background: nothing much to say, just similar to "My vampire system" but with Gods and monster instead of Dalki and invasion. But don't get the wrong idea, there is no invasion here except for the dungeon suddenly springing up everywhere. And whats the best is the possible plot line why suddenly the Catholic God suddenly disappear. MC's Goal: Seems like he wants to save somebody, its a used plot but at least he has a motivation. This is up to chapter 9. Overall it is worth a read. You can criticize me if you found my review unacceptable I am open for it.

Lucifer's Descendant System

Fantasy · Zhanye

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3yr

Commented

hmmm, I can accept the sudden growth but i how can he kill a goblin when he is only a cat? much less a juvenile cat... This is breaking the immersion of the story making things for the readers to relate. I know you wanted the mc to interact with the other character(s) so you can progress with your plot, but please don't look it too forced... still i like it and continue reading.

ch 0 4 Goblins and the girl 2

Adventures of a Hell Cat

Fantasy · Steven_Andy

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3yr

Commented

I like how the system AI is not a control freak, mocking mc or anything of the sort. Really it was annoying how incompetent an mc is relying on the system AI,

ch 0 6 System Unlocked