I love reading and I am trying writing, but you will notice that I am a complete newbie, any advice is welcome
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are you still alive author? I loved your story and I hope you don't drop it and I don't know if you have a release schedule or anything.
ch 10 Chapter 10 — New Employees
Anime & Comics · VonLeporace
Why not?
ch 78 Chapter 78: An alliance of Cats and Bats
Anime & Comics · God_Doom
There is a Japanese children's series with a lot of super strong technologies, from time travel to teleportation and even reality manipulation. The series is called Doraemon the Cosmic Cat and its technologies would return to Batman Op
ch 76 Chapter 76: Homecoming (1)
Anime & Comics · God_Doom
In Dragon Ball there are few melee moves that combine with ki. An idea could be some pointed ki knuckles or two sharp blades on the knuckles as well. or similar themes, I think it is something that is missing a lot in the series and that has a lot of potential.
ch 39 Chapter 39 – Nappa, the Saiyan Juggernaut
Anime & Comics · Equuleus_Nox
I know you don't want to make an op character from the beginning but any Dragon Ball fan would have thought about gravity training and anyone with a little imagination could have thought about underwater training at high pressures, which could be even more harder than gravity alone. Maybe your plan is to put it in now but I also see that you nerfed your character quite a bit, something that I don't see as bad at all if it had logical reasons
ch 23 Chapter 23* – So, We May Die in a Year…
Anime & Comics · Equuleus_Nox
Why not nanobots with nuclear bombs attached ?
ch 51 Chapter 51: The Ultimate Mindscape
Anime & Comics · God_Doom
The technology you were talking about about digital minds is practically the AI technology of the HALO universe. They analyze the brains of deceased people to create AI, with Cortana being the first to be created from a living brain.
ch 40 Chapter 40: Life's just a game full of Disappointment
Anime & Comics · God_Doom
Better a super strong 3 meter tall Batman Custodes, the criminals of Gotham would be scared after seeing that.
ch 39 Chapter 39: Kryptonite & Preparations
Anime & Comics · God_Doom
a fairly powerful weapon that you can use on the bfg 10000 and its small version of doom that thing made a hole in mars and is the size of a naval cannon, it is op
ch 37 Chapter 37: Smallville is a Treasure trove
Anime & Comics · God_Doom
a relatively simple weapon that bruce can make, it's a cold fusion bomb, in itself it's like making an ark reactor but ready to explode, it's a weapon similar to nuclear but clean, and you could even make one that releases radiation similar to a red sun, perfect for kryptonians, since it uses the same concept as the sun, merging two light atoms into a heavier one.
ch 16 Chapter 16: The Court of Owls
Anime & Comics · God_Doom
You need this droid? Ethan
ch 15 Chapter 15: Choosing a Dragon as a Teacher
Anime & Comics · God_Doom
author how about using technologies from the warhammer 40k universe. some are very broken, not to mention that there are weapons of global annihilation perfect to eliminate alien threats, not to mention that if you could go back to bruce a few custodians could defeat him, although his height would give him away a bit. I also recommend the technologies of the universe space battleship yamato. It has a power reactor far superior to the improved ark reactor and antimatter weapons, including one capable of destroying entire continents that is mounted on a 300-meter ship.
ch 14 Chapter 14: First Day at school & meeting a Princess
Anime & Comics · God_Doom
Regarding damage issues, I think you should leave it as if you were playing at maximum difficulty. I have the bad luck of not having played any halo but I have read a lot of fan fic and I follow a lot of people. You should also take into account basic things like that the spartan's energy shield is not the same in halo 1 as it is in halo 5, due to the development of technology and the like. besides that titanium A is very bad with plasma. I would make the protagonist suffer a lot with the weapons of the covenant, because I understand that it can resist human cartridges but it is illogical with plasma, which itself is based on melting everything it touches. As for the Star Wars story, I for one am not interested in that premise. although you could see some story told from the separatist side.
ch 22 Chapter (19) Shit Goes Tits up and the Meeting Continues (3)
Video Games · MEMES_R_gud
The reason that the humans in avatar have such "simple" equipment is because they are mercenaries, they are not a formal army, in addition to the fact that for the trip they cannot carry machinery that is too advanced that requires full logistical support. They have to bring equipment that is easy to maintain and that its spare parts are easy to produce. Also, finally, the resistance of the natives is destined to be in vain, the reason is very simple, while they play with sticks and stones, humanity, despite the bad state it is in in that universe, continues to advance technologically, and it will come the day where instead of being attacked by a group of mercenaries, they will receive an exterminatus
ch 20 20. Tsu'mong
Movies · The_Bip_Boop2003
You should have separated the chapter into two chapters one about the end of the training and the loss of his team and another about the increases and at the same time that you will detail things better, time jumps like this are somewhat awkward
ch 14 Chapter (12) Training and Beta Company (4)
Video Games · MEMES_R_gud
considering the anomaly of the MC it would be too strange that they did not make a specific program for him, he has all the ingredients to surpass the spartan 2 not to mention that his genes could increase the compatibility of the increases to other candidates facilitating the mass production of super soldiers. while it's not exactly what the unsc needs it's quite welcome. ps: what the uncs needs are technological geniuses more than supersoldiers, but these are also useful.
ch 0 7 Chapter (7) I Never Really had a Choice did I?
Video Games · MEMES_R_gud
too small, need this
ch 118 Chapter 118: A Godly Smackdown (1)
DC: I am Bruce Wayne
Anime & Comics · God_Doom