RurlSky_Overlord

3mth

Commented

In all honesty, this is by far one of if not the best first chapters I have read in the years that I've enjoyed this app. Your word choices and gramical expenditures are enticing to the mind and kept me consistently visualizing the story. I can't wait to see where this story goes. Thank you.

ch 0 1 Life, Death, and Other Unusual Magic

Heaven's Greatest Professor

Fantasy · EG0

RurlSky_Overlord

1yr

Commented

His Mom* :)

Ren gasped at the sight of her mom, who was supposed to be suffering from stroke and bedridden when his father died.

MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist

Games · MiuNovels

RurlSky_Overlord

1yr

Replied to AnWan

I can’t do it. The story is great I can see it clearly. However the grammar even after the “editing” is still very terrible in my opinion. I made it to chapter 115, at which point I concluded that I wouldn’t pay to read. Something no matter how good the story is, still needs proper telling aka grammer in this case in order to fully immerse the reader.

Monster Integration

Fantasy · AnWan

RurlSky_Overlord

1yr

Commented

Nooooo

ch 1882 Welcome Home (Part 2)

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

RurlSky_Overlord

1yr

Commented

I still want her to die.

ch 1348 Home and Grief (Part 2)

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

RurlSky_Overlord

2yr

Commented

Idiot break it down for energy

"Alright, I'm done with this place. Let us head back to the Dark Fae Clan," Leon stated after recording a copy of the last runic engraving into the Archive.

Prime Originator

Fantasy · Pointbreak

RurlSky_Overlord

2yr

Commented

I don’t see Rachel and him getting married he has way to many women to keep adding more. And how can they all be overpowered. Overall I love the story tho. I’m not a fan of big harems but still thanks for the good read!

ch 823 You'll Use Something Better