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30*3000=90,000 quite a bit more than fifty thousand...

Thirty Flesh Mound Corpse Officials, each carrying nearly three thousand undead with them; in other words, more than fifty thousand undead had landed in the vicinity of the Great Pyramid of Giza!

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Fantasy · Chaos (Fish's Sky)

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this sentence doesn't make sense as you read it, may want to rephrase it.

Running a frustrated hand through his raven hair, Apollyon said to no one in particular, "Does every faerie in the Spring Courts couldn't mind their own business?" 

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cerberus is singular, might want to adjust that

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