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TYFTC

TYFTC

I just think that if the MC is going to work so much with the memories and knowledge of others, there should be some chatacter development in regards of his own maturity and how he deals with so much knowledge, emotions and points of view derived from the extractions.It feels like a big plot hole for me that he extracted so much memories and doesn't have any explored side effects from it besides learning some techniques from his first summon and other specific instances like when he knows about what the lords know ablut him and are planning.Are there no emotions linkes to the memories? how do they affect the MC? I know its hard to write inteligent characters but I would like to see his personality grows too, not just his soul traits.You're doing a great job writing this novel, I really like reading it. Thanks for the chapter.

TYFTC

TYFTC

I can't find where the author made this mistake, the only noment where they referred to Ethan was when they tlked about the TV show. Every time the focus is on Amoura, the character uaed is Athena.

Please keep this level of quality on your work and you will go far, I really enjoy your novel like few before. If you start to get tired, try uploading less chapters a week, I'd rather read your work once a week than see you drop it due to burnout or something else

Thanks

thanks