Velsharoon

18d

Commented

hey that's what I studied and got my degree in!

Catherine sighed. "I'm a chemical engineering student. Now, does that satisfy you? Can you leave me alone now?"

Building a Business Empire with my Technological System

Sci-fi · Faux1231

Velsharoon

2mth

Posted

Such a great story! Keeps the story progressing at a steady pace and has alot of laughs in it as well! highly recommend it if you have time and want to have an actual good read. So author here take my coins and power stones and keep the story going!!! 🪙🪙

Greatest Streamer System

Fantasy · ShuviLily

Velsharoon

2mth

Posted

overall, it's a really great story! some points are slow in story development but really enjoyed this novel.

The King's Avatar

Games · Butterfly Blue

Velsharoon

5mth

Commented

next chapter is wrong, don't purchase it

ch 1375 All Grade Nine Geniuses

Affinity:Chaos

Fantasy · Springs_Halo

Velsharoon

10mth

Posted

Really enjoyed the story up to around chapter 275. After that the novel took a big change in story direction without even leading up to it, and left the other 270 chapters of development wasted.

First Day In Game, I Got Ten Billion From Infinite Number Of Check-ins

Urban · Ironhead Calabash Brothers

Velsharoon

1yr

Commented

Thank you very much for the mass release!! I am really looking forward to the story progression

ch 665 Shakuni's decision

MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master

Games · Raj_Shah_7152

Velsharoon

1yr

Commented

if you still need beta readers, I'm game! love this book read it everyday

ch 632 A warrior is forged not born

MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Guild Master

Games · Raj_Shah_7152

Velsharoon

2yr

Commented

could they have used the explosions from the fish to damage the sharks

ch 405 No Way Back, A Way Forward!

Realm of Myths and Legends

Games · DaoistZenFeng

Velsharoon

2yr

Commented

why doesn't Izroth ask the grand Master about Gilmore? or about books pertaining to path of dragons

ch 276 Knowledge and Benefits

Realm of Myths and Legends

Games · DaoistZenFeng

Velsharoon

2yr

Commented

please still continue this story!! I have really enjoyed it! there is actually alot you could write about depending how much time you want to spend. here are just a few thoughts: glaze over the explanation given to lord potter, briefly talk about his training on asgard, spend a short bit on his teaching transfiguration, how he becomes head of slythern and then moves to how he creates the defense against the dark arts class and teaches it. then how he deals with Morgana and then takes over as Sorcerer Supreme. then how he finished the super serum, how lord black wins minister of magic and tom basically controls the ministry