Webnovel Author: CrystalKami - Novel Collection

thanks brother. You could really say that you're "The Luckiest Gamer"

Author here, to give myself a free five star review, but also to say thank you all for reading my novel. I promise I’ll update tbe novel soon.

Good luck on your endeavors, mate.

Well yes, what im stating is completely Subjective, So you arent wrong there. just my two Sense

Oh, right, I almost forgot the thing that I found the most egregious; The Naming. could you have not spent a little bit more time with the names? At least research the language you’re using to write the names? As someone who’s learned japanese for the past few years, the names are pretty bad. “Yukionna” actually made me cringe. It seriously do not understand whats so hard about making names.

You are more than entitled to not listen to The criticisms I give, i do not mind.

As much as i would like to accept Your offer, I’ll have to decline. Please refrain from Contacting me further.

Ok.

This series has been one if the best ive read on webnovel. The story is great, the characters are interesting, and the world is fascinating. This series has one MASSIVE flaw, however, and that is its writing. At first the grammar isnt too bad, some misspellings, and some odd word choice but thats about it. 100 or so chapters in, the writing gets very bad… its nigh unreadable past this point. I really do hope the author comes back and fixes a lot of the grammatical errors later down the line.

Obligatory Author Review here. So uhh, idk where I'm going to go with this, but I'm going to have fun doing it, and I hope you all have fun reading it!