Webnovel Author: SinofWrath - Novel Collection

2yr

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Ah yes, the palpitation of the heart.

In the cultivation world, there was a country and in this country, there was a mountain that radiated a faint scarlet glow. This glow emanated a profound aura that caused all mortals who dared to glance to suffer the palpitation of the heart.

Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

SinofWrath

2yr

Commented

Truly the most profound of sentences, one that flows swiftly like the wind.

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Paragon of Sin

Eastern · KevinAscending

SinofWrath

3yr

Commented

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The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

Fantasy · DonnEll

SinofWrath

3yr

Commented

I don't understand how the guild couldn't find the tomes and skill books. What pocket can hold a bunch of books and somehow not get noticed. Unless it's a pocket dimension which only he can access, the company has to be blind to not notice that. Rather than the main character snapping at EL to make the company look like jerks, he should have used the tomes instead which would have been more appropriate.

The Rise Of A Porter

Fantasy · AkshatArpit

SinofWrath

3yr

Commented

The guy knew that they unfairly deduct lay so he goes on to do something stupid, I know the Author said that the MC was stupid at first, but I didn't expect him to be that stupid. You'd think that how much he cared for his sister he would be able to bottle up his emotions, after all like he said back when he was pushed around "I'm used to this.". I don't think this has any significance to the story other than to reinforce the fact that the company he works for is unfair and that hes short tempered.

The Rise Of A Porter

Fantasy · AkshatArpit

SinofWrath

3yr

Commented

My first awakening of Grammar Nazi right here.

The Rise Of A Porter

Fantasy · AkshatArpit

SinofWrath

3yr

Commented

Who is this EL? Is it the characters actual name or is it a nickname or something, because it's quite hard to tell. Also considering he is being interviewed, you'd expect the Reporter to talk to EL using his actual name formally, but instead she uses EL as if she's best friends with him. Unless that's his name, which is a first.

The Rise Of A Porter

Fantasy · AkshatArpit

SinofWrath

3yr

Commented

I can get behind the excuses because they sound like something they would do, but being poor doesn't mean they should decrease pay. It makes sense for the rest because they are worthy of pay deduction but just being poor sounds unrealistic.

The Rise Of A Porter

Fantasy · AkshatArpit

SinofWrath

3yr

Commented

Caressing doesn't seem fitting for this situation. Caressing is associated with intimate feelings, while he just got kicked in the back. I know this might sound Grammar Nazi-ish, but it's just helping out the author correct his mistakes, so no harm done.

"Don't get mad... don't get mad..." Arnold murmured and quietly got up and started caressing his back.

The Rise Of A Porter

Fantasy · AkshatArpit

SinofWrath

3yr

Commented

Grammatical error: You can't put an exclamation mark at the end of that sentence when he murmured it. Murmured means saying it quietly, almost as quite as a whisper.

The Rise Of A Porter

Fantasy · AkshatArpit

SinofWrath

3yr

Commented

Dread it, run from it, Wuying still arrives... So you might as well embrace it.

"I need to somehow lessen those emotions. They are not mine after all," Xuefeng decided after thinking it through.

Spirit Cultivation

Eastern · Piokilek

SinofWrath

3yr

Commented

Monarch of Time

Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian

SinofWrath

3yr

Commented

He said "Ah" like he was drinking a Pina collada

Monarch of Time

Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian

SinofWrath

3yr

Commented

More meme references

Code Zulu Alpha: Nerd in the Apocalypse!

Horror · Sky2316

SinofWrath

3yr

Commented

That's what she said 😏

Code Zulu Alpha: Nerd in the Apocalypse!

Horror · Sky2316

SinofWrath

3yr

Commented

I still don't know where this is going

ch 0 5 The Pool Of Dreams

Brockwing Vale

Fantasy · Craig_Beckham

SinofWrath

3yr

Commented

YOU CAN RUN, BUT YOU CANT HIDE

When Worlds Collide

Brockwing Vale

Fantasy · Craig_Beckham

SinofWrath

3yr

Commented

From this day on, I will be reading Fariq's lines in an Indian accent.

"Hello, I take it you are Benjamin? I'm Fariq, from India, and we will be roommates from now on. It is a pleasure to meet you. I did not expect to share a room with an established entrepreneur, which is my great honor."