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Reddsaint

Reddsaint

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Just an insufferable Chuuni who's a writer for fun

2020-02-07 Joined United States

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Would've rather seen some new more personal transformations, maybe with new powers included, then just the same straight color changer multipliers

The red haired form resembles one's base, so it should've been labeled "Saiyan God," with Super Saiyan Blue having the name "Super Saiyan God" instead.

Dragon Ball: Back in Black

Dragon Ball: Back in Black

Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra

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Struck by heavenly lightning? Found and ate the Red Pine Fruit? Plead the 5th? All much easier than this unprovoked web of lies

''Originally I was attacked by some people and was left to die bleeding on the ground when a thunderstorm erupted, a few hours ago about 3 miles away from the Blue Forest. Then just as I was about to die an elderly person that was flying close to me, grabbed me and rescued me from the storm. When he saw the injuries on my body, he gave me some mysterious pill and when I swallowed it my injuries started healing instantly. Then after an incense stick of time had passed my injuries had already healed and not even a scar was left behind. It was truly miraculous. But then the elder abruptly left as soon as he saw that my injuries had healed and I didn't even have the time to ask for his name as he soared in the sky and flew towards the east.''

Monarch of Time

Monarch of Time

Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian

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The presence of a sword indicates the imminence of war. Why gain power if not to use it?

"In another year, the Canglan Star Challenge will take place. I would like to ask Mr. Lin to represent Dongning City."

Creating Heavenly Laws

Creating Heavenly Laws

Anime & Comics · Lordanos_80

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Everything Sir Squirrel said was perfectly accurate, the decisions made seem flippant at best and the development of his power manages to seem both unearned and lackluster simultaneously. The problem begins at the very beginning. We are given the illusion that his system-like Sacred Gear offers the choice between certain class sets. This is a mistake because any choice the MC could've made would be met with skepticism from people who wanted something different. But the author made the MC choose the worst possible class, a production class that would put him at the mercy of whoever decides to fund his operation and give him little combat potential returns compared to other ones hypothetically. Now, this could be a moot point for a couple reasons. The author plans on giving the Boosted Gear to the MC. That would eliminate the need for combat potential from a different class. There are also 'permanent boost elixirs' he has already introduced. A roundabout way but still a solid one. But there are other methods to have done this without the disappointing illusion of choice and the odd, undeserved shoehorning of the FMA style alchemy powers. Exhibit A: A Sacred Gear that simply gives him the powers of the world of FMA. The MC would be forced to learn and explore the world he was dropped into from a magi-scientific standpoint in order to shape it accurately, which would be interesting in itself. Being an amped FMA alchemist would allow limitless avenues to transmute himself, increase his combat potential and "spell" arsenal, and create alchemical enhancers, especially the Philosopher's Stone. Exhibit B: Reincarnate a character from FMA:B instead of a random teen. Exhibit C: Make him choose Mage instead and put enchanting and potion brewing as part of that system. Now, I could've handled all the fumbling so far as long as the story is entertaining and the MC rises to the occasion consistently despite this. But the worst part of this story for me is: Slow updates, and SHORT, SHORT chapters. I'm talking barely over a thousand words. Now this is a new story, so there are only 16 chapters to work with right now. But by God, I'm predicting right now that he won't wrap up with Riser's arc until between chapter 30 or 40, and based on that, I'm not sure if I want to stick around for that kind of chapter length.

Reddsaint
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Representing passion or selfishness vs. fate or karmic ties

A throbbing heart and a fragile, beautiful red thread, barely holding together, were the choices given in the dream.

Journey Of Zoro In Another World

Journey Of Zoro In Another World

Anime & Comics · Fumiaki

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Careful, he might wander into another universe again

Toji naturally caught Zoro by the nape of his neck as he tried to veer off onto a different path, pulling him back to his side. This was the eighth time he had to do so.

Journey Of Zoro In Another World

Journey Of Zoro In Another World

Anime & Comics · Fumiaki

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Rookie numbers

...It finally went down. It took me 3 hours to finally get it down. Thankfully the effect got less intense over time after taking the potion but that didn't change the fact that I busted it 5 times. It was a lot of man milk too, at least way more than I did in my previous in life in one shot.

Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent

Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent

Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck

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He felt more resistance than he would imagine possible; as the two struggled in place. Suddenly, Black Bolt's grip on Superman's wrist loosened as with his other hand; he created a sword of shining red, a blade of pure rage.

DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD

DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD

Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER

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Haha, RussianBadger reference

"Respectfully your honour, shut the fuck up. You weren't even there."

Fate/Fisted

Fate/Fisted

Anime & Comics · Bleap

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Slow? You have to wait for Z to happen for a real challenge now. Of course it is good to be prepared but...

My injured body was brought back up to full strength, and I could immediately feel that my power level had risen. It wasn't much, maybe two or three hundred, but it was enough for now. I had a power level of 2,500 when I was born. I'm four years old now, and my power level had reached over 9,000 about a month ago. It aggravated me to no end how slow my growth was, but there was little I could do about it now.

Dragon Ball: Back in Black

Dragon Ball: Back in Black

Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra

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"It's tradition at this point." Tessarion carefully pulls his fresh catch ashore and nearly throws himself between an incoming dragon and the flopping redfish. ""Fuck off!"" I snort and shake my head as the solid red dragon roars at my Son before getting angry and using its tail to throw a wall of sand at my boy before it pushes off the ground and returns to the sky.

GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy

GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy

Book&Literature · Pretending_Author

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And if there is a moat around it, and it's dragonstone? Entry level=impossible.

"Sounds like it would be more of a pain to make than it would be worth, they would rather chip away at the stone than go through Valyrian Steel." It would be much faster as well...

GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy

GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy

Book&Literature · Pretending_Author

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But Bruce Wayne might.

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I think Batman only kept to that philosophy for himself, he didn't particularly care if other people killed bad guys in some comics.

Hmm. I don't think I'll ever make Bruce Wayne's Christmas Card list. Because I object to his obsessive catch and release policy with mass murdering psychotics. When I get the chance, I'll act on it, too. Because the Joker isn't a human, he's a disease. Okay, so maybe Bruce has a whole slippery slope with murder thing going on, I don't particularly have his issues. Oh, I sure do have issues, but they seem to be more on the overconfidence, anger and arrogance side. Maybe immaturity?

Marvel Mutant in DC

Marvel Mutant in DC

Anime & Comics · superman1265789

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